- Invert diagnosis:proposal ratio; introduce "userdom" as carrying term (abstract → §1 → §7 → Coda) - New §1 "The Engine and the Outside" opens with platforms-as-engine, Whistlegraph as payload grounded in RDP/35C3/Goodiepal tour - Compress §2 (Complex) 4 subs → 3 paragraphs; compress §3 (Critique-as- Content) to 4 paragraphs with "critique-without-cultivating" close - §4 absorbs Structural Trap; drop "Two Pedagogies" (calarts/open-schools handle that work better) - §5 redefines anti-environment structurally as non-oppositional - New §6 "What Has Been Built" catalogs 7 AC commitments citing platter siblings (url-tradition, pieces, notepat, kidlisp, os/identity, goodiepal, archaeology) - New §7 "The Engine and the Userdom" resolves the Whistlegraph paradox with 365-day TikTok Analytics footnote (17.69M views, median 43k/day, Apr 2025 → Apr 2026, post-trio hiatus) - New §8 funding-as-conversion-problem (not martyrdom); new Coda commitment list - Cards regenerated via cards-convert.mjs - 10 sibling-paper bib entries added Translations (da/es/zh/ja) still describe the old argument structure and need a follow-up retranslation pass.