From 53482efd7fcd6df5770b2161f8aa21228c361d5e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Darin McBride Date: Thu, 20 Dec 2012 16:00:46 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Fix some typos, add some excitement to the Construction boom series of missions --- missions/Construction_boom.mission | 2 +- missions/Construction_boom.part2 | 2 +- missions/Construction_boom.part3 | 4 ++-- 3 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/missions/Construction_boom.mission b/missions/Construction_boom.mission index a02345a..9b6d192 100755 --- a/missions/Construction_boom.mission +++ b/missions/Construction_boom.mission @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # config-file-type: JSON 1 { - "description" : "This is a great time to be a construction supply company. I just noticed that construction stopped on a nearby luxury housing development. The reason seems to be that there is no drywall available. How about we be partners. I purchased an old factory and I need to retrofit it to produce drywall. Help me provide the materials for the retro fit. In exchange I will give you the deed to a fusion reactor I operated during an energy crisis.", + "description" : "This is a great time to be a construction supply company! I just noticed that construction stopped on a nearby luxury housing development, there is no drywall available! Can you believe that? How about we be partners? I purchased an old factory and I need to retrofit it to produce drywall. If you help me provide the materials for the retro fit, I will give you the deed to a fusion reactor I operated during an energy crisis.", "max_university_level" : "7", "mission_objective" : { "resources" : { diff --git a/missions/Construction_boom.part2 b/missions/Construction_boom.part2 index 200b5a7..ad6da1e 100755 --- a/missions/Construction_boom.part2 +++ b/missions/Construction_boom.part2 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # config-file-type: JSON 1 { - "description" : "I finally got this factory retrofitted to produce drywall, but in my excitement I forgot to order raw materials. I need your help. If you can fulfill this order I will make it worth your while.", + "description" : "I finally got this factory retrofitted to produce drywall, but in my excitement I forgot to order the raw materials. I need your help, again, partner. If you can fulfill this order I will make it worth your while!", "max_university_level" : "10", "mission_objective" : { "resources" : { diff --git a/missions/Construction_boom.part3 b/missions/Construction_boom.part3 index 693fafc..16fd6dc 100755 --- a/missions/Construction_boom.part3 +++ b/missions/Construction_boom.part3 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # config-file-type: JSON 1 { - "description" : "Can you believe it! I lost the drywall contract because it took too long to fill the order. No fear I signed a new contract off world, but I have no way of transporting the finished product. I am ready to get out of the drywall business. Take care of this contract and you can have the factory for cheap. With some minor modifications you can turn it into an Oversight Ministry.", + "description" : "Can you believe it! I lost the drywall contract because it took too long to fill the order. No fear! I signed a new contract off world, but I have no way of transporting the finished product. I am ready to get out of the drywall business. Take care of this contract and you can have the factory for cheap. With some minor modifications you can turn it into an Oversight Ministry.", "max_university_level" : "7", "mission_objective" : { "resources" : { @@ -29,6 +29,6 @@ "ships" : [] }, "name" : "Construction Boom-Shipment", - "network_19_completion" : "Drywall prices drop to lowest level in years due to supply.", + "network_19_completion" : "Drywall prices drop to lowest level in years due to over supply.", "network_19_headline" : "Drywall shortages expected to stop once the new shipment is made." } -- 2.51.2