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 Slacker News began with a dream: fewer flamewars. The Slack is not a good place for hard conversations, especially public ones. You deserve better than to have your idea buried in a thread with 1000+ replies. And you deserve a fair hearing. Slacker News is the way. Few responses written carefully, instead of many responses written quickly.
 
-Slacker News is your newspaper too. I am asking you to share your thoughts. Including criticism, and yes, including criticism of HQ. As of today, Slacker News lets stories be marked as followups or responses to other stories (as demonstrated above). This is meant to make the paper more like the conversation it is meant to be.
+This is your newspaper too. I am asking you to share your thoughts. Including criticism, even of HQ. As of today, Slacker News lets stories be marked as followups or responses to other stories (as demonstrated above). This is meant to make the paper more like the conversation it is meant to be.
 
 Hack Club has come a long way. Sometimes we are divided over how it should run, but we are united by the fact that we were lucky enough to find this special place. I am giving you a higher stage, I am handing you a louder microphone. I am asking you to elevate the quality of disagreement here so that it can build the even better Hack Club we all want to see.
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