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 * We are the souls
 ** Shalom from Shiva
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-   I spend too much time getting my ass handed to me by all kinds of hollows, undead, accursed monsters and a bunch of bare foot women. And enjoyed every bit of it.
+   This post is about role playing and consist of edgy stories that have no weight other than - I wanted to share something I find fun. I love creating stories for my characters in any game. So skip it, you won't loose anything.
 
-   The following text will contain a lot of *spoilers* and references, that will be clear to you only if you played the games. So don't read further if you haven't beat Ornstein & Smough, you filthy *CASUL*.
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-** Disclaimer
+   Also this post contains spoilers to Dark Souls series, so if you didn't play them yet I highly recommend. Or to get into atmosphere, watch some theory videos like {https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BwjUe4B_g7M}[Hawkshaw's lore videos].
 
 ** Why Dark Souls?
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     So, that was a story I made up for my first Dark Souls 3 character that was abandonment because I couldn't keep playing at 20 fps in 450p while being wrecked for 100th time by /Dragonslayer Armour/. I am a big *ymfah* fan (/no, I don't know how to pronounce it/), and before starting playing DS3, I have watched {https://youtu.be/vUctR5y2JLc}[this video] and got inspired to have Onyx blade be my first proper weapon and complete the whole game with it. So I cheesed Vilhelm by dropping him off a cliff, and learned some dark pyromancy from Karla. Also got the cool fire keeper's dress for 20K souls, best investment ever.
 
-    Also, I only create female characters in DS3, idk why. In most other games I don't care about that, depending on the mood or game mechanics. But all characters moving forward will be girls. And on a better PC too, because my brother let me play DS3 on his beefy ahhh pc. So I created a new character and went for my first 100% of the game.
+    Also, I only create female characters in DS3, idk why. In most other games I don't care about that, it mostly depends on the mood or game mechanics. But all characters moving forward will be girls. And on a better PC too, because my brother let me play DS3 on his beefy ahhh pc. So I created a new character and went for my first 100% of the game.
 
 ** Mercenary Sister
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 ** This is not the end of me, this is the beginning
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-   Hello again, hope you didn't cringe to death from over the top edgy stories. Well, you always rise again anyways. 
+   Hello again, hope you didn't cringe to death from over the top scratches on the wall that some schizo calls "stories". Well, you always rise again anyways. 
+
+   In the end, stories from this post don't make sense. They shouldn't, because it's just on the fly interpretations of characters I play as. It's just a glimpe into what makes games fun for me, and I hope it can inspire you to go beyond "META", to strife for more than perfection. 
 
-   In the end, stories from this post don't make sense. They shouldn't, because it's just on the fly interpretations of characters I play as. It's just a glimpe into what makes games fun for me, 
+   This world is full of stories to tell, but it doesn't mean you can't make your own. In many worlds to come, games to play, music to listen to - never forget your imagination as the tool nobody else can give you.