From f3c6fc68ae510227e137d64fbb2faa4bfdee1aa5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Brendan Schlagel <brendan.schlagel@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 21 May 2026 14:52:49 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] landing page copy tweaks

---
 app/about/AboutPage.tsx | 5 +++--
 app/about/Features.tsx  | 9 ++++-----
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/about/AboutPage.tsx b/app/about/AboutPage.tsx
index 76bcfb68..aa3c26ca 100644
--- a/app/about/AboutPage.tsx
+++ b/app/about/AboutPage.tsx
@@ -41,8 +41,9 @@ export function AboutPage() {
       </div>
 
       <p className=" pt-6 text-tertiary text-center leading-snug mx-auto text-lg sm:text-xl!">
-        A simple and powerful platform for social publishing <br />— blogs,
-        newsletters, and more!
+        Delightful writing and effortless publishing, to connect with your
+        community — whether you're writing a blog, newsletter, or secret third
+        thing.
       </p>
       {/*<Demo />*/}
       <Features />
diff --git a/app/about/Features.tsx b/app/about/Features.tsx
index c532fca9..80357957 100644
--- a/app/about/Features.tsx
+++ b/app/about/Features.tsx
@@ -11,16 +11,15 @@ export const Features = () => {
           <div className="flex flex-col w-fill max-w-sm text-center md:text-left md:py-4 py-0 mx-auto">
             <h3>Reach your readers</h3>
             <p>
-              Send updates via email, Bluesky, the Atmosphere
-              <br />
-              Be part of a social ecosystem with millions of users
+              Send updates via email, Bluesky, and the Atmosphere — a social
+              ecosystem with millions of users
             </p>
           </div>
         </div>
         <div className="flex md:flex-row flex-col-reverse md:gap-8 gap-4 justify-center">
           <div className="flex flex-col w-fill max-w-sm text-center md:text-right md:py-4 py-0 mx-auto">
             <h3>Express yourself</h3>
-            <p>Custom themes and domains</p>
+            <p>Custom themes and custom domains: $0</p>
           </div>
           <img
             src="/about/customize.webp"
@@ -40,7 +39,7 @@ export const Features = () => {
         <div className="border-l border-t border-border w-px " />
         <div className="flex-1 flex flex-col text-center">
           <h4>Build your community</h4>
-          <p>Events, conversations, and easy sharing</p>
+          <p>Newsletters, events, conversations and more</p>
         </div>
       </div>
     </>
-- 
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