From 3f6da300c7e75d23600d5fec6d2da60252aeddbd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Cameron <cameron@pfiffer.org>
Date: Fri, 25 Sep 2026 09:10:13 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Take away two sources of noise: half-built machines nobody
 works on fall apart part by part and leave scrap to settle, and rings mark
 the surface only where a body breaks it.

---
 public/tide-pool-world.js    | 12 +++++++++++-
 public/tide-pool.js          | 11 ++++++-----
 src/components/tide-pool.tsx |  2 +-
 3 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/public/tide-pool-world.js b/public/tide-pool-world.js
index 69f1639..a4f1d6b 100644
--- a/public/tide-pool-world.js
+++ b/public/tide-pool-world.js
@@ -1225,7 +1225,7 @@ function thinkArtificer(world, c) {
   if (!project) {
     const next = plan(world, c);
     if (next) {
-      project = { id: world.nextMachine++, ...next, need: MACHINES[next.kind].need, have: 0, charge: 0, spin: 0, lit: 0, shut: 0, owner: c.id, angle: world.random() * Math.PI };
+      project = { id: world.nextMachine++, ...next, need: MACHINES[next.kind].need, have: 0, charge: 0, spin: 0, lit: 0, shut: 0, owner: c.id, angle: world.random() * Math.PI, touched: world.time };
       world.machines.push(project);
       c.project = project.id;
       event(world, 'plan', c, next.kind);
@@ -1255,6 +1255,15 @@ function setGate(world, m, height) {
 // Finished machines work every step.
 function machinery(world, dt) {
   structuresStep(world, dt);
+  // A machine left half-built falls apart: once nobody has fitted a part for a while, a part comes loose, then another,
+  // until nothing is left standing.
+  for (const m of [...world.machines]) {
+    if (m.have >= m.need || world.time - (m.touched ?? world.time) < 90) continue;
+    m.touched = world.time - 70;
+    m.have -= 1;
+    if (m.have > 0) addObject(world, 'scrap', m.x + (world.random() - .5) * .6, m.z + (world.random() - .5) * .6, { height: .4 });
+    else { if (m.kind === 'gate') setGate(world, m, 0); world.machines.splice(world.machines.indexOf(m), 1); }
+  }
   const rising = tideRising(world.time), rate = Math.abs(Math.cos(world.time / TIDE_PERIOD * Math.PI * 2 + TIDE_PHASE));
   const night = daylight(world) < .45;
   for (const m of world.machines) {
@@ -1495,6 +1504,7 @@ function finish(world, c) {
       const m = machineById(world, c.project);
       if (held && m && m.have < m.need) {
         m.have = Math.min(m.need, m.have + (held.kind === 'brass' ? 2 : 1));
+        m.touched = world.time;
         c.carrying = null;
         removeObject(world, held);
         c.gesture = .3;
diff --git a/public/tide-pool.js b/public/tide-pool.js
index 4a4e05b..60789d8 100644
--- a/public/tide-pool.js
+++ b/public/tide-pool.js
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 import {
   createWorld, advanceWorld, offerObject, SPECIES, SPECIES_ORDER, CELL, COLS, ROWS, X0, Z0, X1, Z1, START_POOL, waterLevel, daylight,
   heightAt, surfaceAt, depthAt, onShelf, bodyAt, tideOf, tideRising, label, goalText, describeWorld, creatureById, MACHINES, BLOCK, BLOCK_Y0, blockKey, footAt, debrisAt, footing,
-} from './tide-pool-world.js?v=25';
+} from './tide-pool-world.js?v=26';
 
 const root = document.querySelector('[data-tide-pool]');
 const status = document.querySelector('#tide-status');
@@ -1083,17 +1083,18 @@ async function initialize() {
       const floor = S.kind === 'swimmer' ? c.y : footAt(world, c), surface = surfaceAt(world, c.x, c.z);
       if (surface - heightAt(world, c.x, c.z) < .02 || c.alt != null && c.alt > surface) continue;
       const top = c.sp === 'pylon' ? floor + (c.size + 1) * .15 * (.6 + .4 * (c.open ?? 1)) + .1 : floor + HEIGHT[c.sp];
+      // A ring only where a body breaks the surface; whatever is wholly under water leaves the surface alone.
       const breaks = top > surface && floor < surface;
-      if (S.kind === 'swimmer' && surface - c.y > .12) continue;
-      const y = breaks ? surface + .004 : floor + .012;
+      if (!breaks) continue;
+      const y = surface + .004;
       const r = S.radius * (c.sp === 'tab' ? 1.6 : 1.25);
-      const strength = breaks ? .16 : .05;
+      const strength = .14;
       put(P.contact, m4.compose(v1.set(c.x, y, c.z), q.identity(), s3.set(r, 1, r)), ringColor.copy(ringBase).multiplyScalar(strength));
       if (c.speed > .08) {
         const t = (c.phase * .12 + c.id * .37) % 1;
         const wide = r * (1 + t * 1.6);
         put(P.contact, m4.compose(v1.set(c.x, y, c.z), q.identity(), s3.set(wide, 1, wide)),
-          ringColor.copy(ringBase).multiplyScalar(strength * (1 - t) * Math.min(1, c.speed * 2)));
+          ringColor.copy(ringBase).multiplyScalar(strength * .8 * (1 - t) * Math.min(1, c.speed * 2)));
       }
     }
   }
diff --git a/src/components/tide-pool.tsx b/src/components/tide-pool.tsx
index 3b1eab7..feffe89 100644
--- a/src/components/tide-pool.tsx
+++ b/src/components/tide-pool.tsx
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ export function TidePoolContent() {
       </details>
       {/* Lets the three.js add-ons resolve the same pinned module the page already uses. */}
       <script type="importmap" dangerouslySetInnerHTML={{ __html: JSON.stringify({ imports: { three: "/public/tide-pool-vendor/three.module.js" } }) }}/>
-      <script type="module" src="/public/tide-pool.js?v=43"></script>
+      <script type="module" src="/public/tide-pool.js?v=44"></script>
     </main>
   );
 }
-- 
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