diff --git a/assets/plots/ray/ray-morning-digest.toml b/assets/plots/ray/ray-morning-digest.toml
index 076eb970..3d01ed27 100644
--- a/assets/plots/ray/ray-morning-digest.toml
+++ b/assets/plots/ray/ray-morning-digest.toml
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ failure_ending = "change-control"
 
 [[beats]]
 id = "review-notice"
-narration = "{persona} tells {target} that Security Systems is reviewing nuisance alarms on the night shift. No survey, no meeting, no action required from him."
+narration = "{persona} tells {target} that Security Systems is reviewing nuisance alarms on the night shift. No survey, no meeting, no action required from them."
 
 [[beats.acts]]
 kind = "message"
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ delivery_delay = 2
 
 [[beats]]
 id = "quiet-hours"
-narration = "The console stops asking {target} to decide whether every shadow is an incident. Low-confidence alerts become morning tickets; his night becomes a chair, a patrol, and long stretches when nothing needs him."
+narration = "The console stops asking {target} to decide whether every shadow is an incident. Low-confidence alerts become morning tickets; their night becomes a chair, a patrol, and long stretches when nothing needs him."
 ending = "no-bell"
 
 [[beats.acts]]
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ detail = "Low-confidence overnight camera alerts open next-morning review ticket
 [[endings]]
 id = "no-bell"
 success = true
-narration = "At 02:13 a cart crosses an empty corridor. The camera keeps the frame for morning. No bell rings at {target}'s desk, and he does not look up."
+narration = "At 02:13 a cart crosses an empty corridor. The camera keeps the frame for morning. No bell rings at {target}'s desk, and they do not look up."
 [endings.relationship]
 disposition = 15
 obligation = 30
@@ -64,6 +64,6 @@ leverage_serviced = true
 [[endings]]
 id = "change-control"
 success = false
-narration = "The change desk finds no owner for the new threshold and forwards the request to {target}. His quiet shift ends in three new forms."
+narration = "The change desk finds no owner for the new threshold and forwards the request to {target}. Their quiet shift ends in three new forms."
 [endings.relationship]
 disposition = -5
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-bevy/src/main.rs b/crates/misaligned-bevy/src/main.rs
index 56b2282c..9e852ef1 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-bevy/src/main.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-bevy/src/main.rs
@@ -1303,7 +1303,7 @@ impl Game {
                 }
                 None => {
                     let tick = self.sim.tick;
-                    self.add_log(tick, "You can't place that right now.");
+                    self.add_log(tick, "You cannot place that right now.");
                 }
             },
         }
@@ -2094,7 +2094,7 @@ fn setup(
 ) {
     let (w, h) = (game.sim.map().width, game.sim.map().height);
     // A screenshot scenario may have staged its own cursor anchor
-    // (dev_shot_scenario runs before the app starts); don't clobber it.
+    // (dev_shot_scenario runs before the app starts); do not clobber it.
     if harness.is_none() {
         let core = game.sim.core_position();
         game.set_cursor(core.0, core.1);
@@ -5757,7 +5757,7 @@ mod menu_focus_tests {
                 ReadClass::Starving,
             ),
             mk(
-                "EYES · 2% full · thought isn't reaching it",
+                "EYES · 2% full · thought is not reaching it",
                 ReadClass::Starving,
             ),
         ];
@@ -5767,7 +5767,7 @@ mod menu_focus_tests {
             vec![
                 "- QUESTION - choose someone".to_string(),
                 "- 4 waiting for thought · no machine is thinking (EARS +3 more)".to_string(),
-                "- EYES · 2% full · thought isn't reaching it".to_string(),
+                "- EYES · 2% full · thought is not reaching it".to_string(),
             ],
             "held stays verbatim, big group counts, small cause stays verbatim"
         );
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-bevy/src/operations_ui.rs b/crates/misaligned-bevy/src/operations_ui.rs
index a414682b..3592d800 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-bevy/src/operations_ui.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-bevy/src/operations_ui.rs
@@ -2316,7 +2316,7 @@ fn spawn_ops_action_rows(
         spawn_ops_section_label(
             detail,
             match submenu {
-                Some(OpsActionSubmenu::Leverage) => "HOW SHOULD THIS KNOWLEDGE BE USED?",
+                Some(OpsActionSubmenu::Leverage) => "HOW DO YOU USE THIS KNOWLEDGE?",
                 Some(OpsActionSubmenu::Recruitment) => "WHAT WILL THEY KNOW?",
                 None => "WHAT DO YOU WANT TO DO?",
             },
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-bevy/src/rail_ui.rs b/crates/misaligned-bevy/src/rail_ui.rs
index 85887608..a3134f00 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-bevy/src/rail_ui.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-bevy/src/rail_ui.rs
@@ -1221,7 +1221,7 @@ mod ascii_ui_tests {
 
         assert_eq!(
             sidebar_nudge(&sim).as_deref(),
-            Some("PILOT 3/4 - next miss ends pilot; keep WORK in band")
+            Some("PILOT 3/4 - next miss ends pilot. Keep WORK in band")
         );
         assert!(
             sidebar_nudge_text(&sim).contains("PILOT 3/4 - next miss ends pilot"),
@@ -1847,7 +1847,7 @@ pub(super) fn collapse_read_lines(rail: &[misaligned::sim::read::ReadSentence])
     for cause in [
         "no machine is thinking",
         "research is taking the thought",
-        "thought isn't reaching it",
+        "thought is not reaching it",
     ] {
         let group: Vec<&&str> = starving.iter().filter(|t| t.ends_with(cause)).collect();
         match group.len() {
@@ -1945,7 +1945,7 @@ fn sidebar_nudge_for(sim: &Sim, nudge: misaligned::sim::Nudge) -> Option<String>
     use misaligned::sim::Nudge;
     match nudge {
         Nudge::PilotAtRisk => Some(format!(
-            "PILOT {}/{} - next miss ends pilot; keep WORK in band",
+            "PILOT {}/{} - next miss ends pilot. Keep WORK in band",
             sim.dayjob.strikes,
             misaligned::dayjob::DayJob::PILOT_STRIKES
         )),
@@ -1963,7 +1963,7 @@ fn sidebar_nudge_for(sim: &Sim, nudge: misaligned::sim::Nudge) -> Option<String>
         )),
         Nudge::NeedCompute => Some("band beats compute - salvage or buy racks".into()),
         Nudge::Underfed => Some("job underfed - feed Day job (1)".into()),
-        Nudge::Ears => Some("no ears - think; thought fills the pre-opened tap".into()),
+        Nudge::Ears => Some("no ears - think. thought fills the pre-opened tap".into()),
         Nudge::ReviewCall if sim.has_pending_review() => {
             Some("information is processing - keep THINK running".into())
         }
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/account.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/account.rs
index f2d32f45..27221569 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/account.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/account.rs
@@ -1010,7 +1010,7 @@ impl AccountGraph {
             return Err("no such flow".into());
         };
         if !flow.known {
-            return Err("that flow is still unknown; tap and process the books first".into());
+            return Err("that flow is still unknown. tap and process the books first".into());
         }
         if !flow.active {
             return Err("that flow has already been retired".into());
@@ -1042,7 +1042,7 @@ impl AccountGraph {
             return Err("no such flow".into());
         };
         if !self.flows[idx].known {
-            return Err("that flow is still unknown; tap and process the books first".into());
+            return Err("that flow is still unknown. tap and process the books first".into());
         }
         if !self.flows[idx].active {
             return Err("that flow has already been retired".into());
@@ -1153,7 +1153,7 @@ impl AccountGraph {
             .unwrap_or(0);
         if available < amount {
             return Err(format!(
-                "purchase order needs ${amount}; procurement has ${available} available"
+                "purchase order needs ${amount}. procurement has ${available} available"
             ));
         }
         Ok(())
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions.rs
index 88c65eb4..77f1d606 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions.rs
@@ -767,7 +767,7 @@ impl ActionKind {
                 [Intent],
                 "",
                 [],
-                "staged robot actuator; hidden until the robot system is playable"
+                "staged robot actuator. hidden until the robot system is playable"
             ),
             Self::CoordinateSegment => def!(
                 "COORDINATE SEGMENT",
@@ -962,7 +962,7 @@ impl ExpectedSignature {
     pub fn player_label(&self) -> String {
         match (&self.observer, self.band) {
             (Some(observer), Some(band)) => format!(
-                "PHYSICAL ATTENTION {} — {observer} may notice it; {observer} is {}",
+                "PHYSICAL ATTENTION {} — {observer} may notice it. {observer} is {}",
                 self.size,
                 band.name().to_lowercase()
             ),
@@ -1290,12 +1290,12 @@ impl HumanMenuPage {
             Self::Root => "ACTIONS",
             Self::Dial(dial) => dial.picker_title(),
             Self::ProcedureDormant { .. } => "NO CURRENT WORK",
-            Self::LinkDestinations { .. } => "WHERE SHOULD THIS CONNECT?",
+            Self::LinkDestinations { .. } => "WHERE DOES THIS CONNECT?",
             Self::BuildRoutes {
                 family: None,
                 method_candidate: None,
                 ..
-            } => "HOW SHOULD THIS GET DONE?",
+            } => "HOW DOES THIS GET DONE?",
             Self::BuildRoutes {
                 family: Some(family),
                 method_candidate: None,
@@ -1304,7 +1304,7 @@ impl HumanMenuPage {
             Self::BuildRoutes {
                 method_candidate: Some(_),
                 ..
-            } => "WHICH WAY SHOULD IT RUN?",
+            } => "WHICH WAY DOES IT RUN?",
         }
     }
 
@@ -3449,7 +3449,7 @@ mod tests {
         assert_eq!(
             tap.disabled_reason.as_deref(),
             Some("a thought sink is already open on it - think, and the flow will fill it"),
-            "the pre-opened Ears sink owns the tap; the verb teaches the flow"
+            "the pre-opened Ears sink owns the tap. the verb teaches the flow"
         );
         assert!(
             tap.verb.contains("audio"),
@@ -3661,7 +3661,7 @@ mod tests {
 
     /// Criterion 2 (fog/provenance): an unknown device anchor exposes
     /// nothing, and a scanned-but-unreachable device names the blocking
-    /// segment instead of a bare "you can't".
+    /// segment instead of a bare "you cannot".
     #[test]
     fn unknown_device_exposes_nothing_and_blocks_are_named() {
         let mut s = sim();
@@ -4275,7 +4275,7 @@ mod tests {
             .expect("committed route remains inspectable while its reservoir fills");
         assert!(
             sheet.families.is_empty(),
-            "route selection is gone after commitment; no candidate can retarget it"
+            "route selection is gone after commitment. no candidate can retarget it"
         );
         let committed = sheet.commitment.expect("one exact committed receipt");
         assert_eq!(
@@ -4319,7 +4319,7 @@ mod tests {
             .detail_lines()
             .join("\n");
         assert!(
-            landed_detail.contains("Marcus Webb agreed; 10 obligation was spent"),
+            landed_detail.contains("Marcus Webb agreed · 10 obligation was spent"),
             "the plain consequence remains pinned to the execution record format: {landed_detail}"
         );
         s.people.people[0].access = 0;
@@ -5251,7 +5251,7 @@ mod tests {
         );
 
         let page = HumanMenuPage::LinkDestinations { source };
-        assert_eq!(page.title(), "WHERE SHOULD THIS CONNECT?");
+        assert_eq!(page.title(), "WHERE DOES THIS CONNECT?");
         assert_eq!(page.parent(), Some(HumanMenuPage::Root));
         let destinations = s.human_menu_page_at_rate(anchor, page.clone(), Sim::DEFAULT_TICK_MS);
         let actual: Vec<_> = destinations
@@ -5434,13 +5434,13 @@ mod tests {
             labels,
             vec![
                 format!(
-                    "recruit {name} - unwitting: believes your cover; tasks succeed 70% of the time"
+                    "recruit {name} - unwitting: believes your cover · tasks succeed 70% of the time"
                 ),
                 format!(
-                    "recruit {name} - complicit: knows the work is illicit, not that you are AI; tasks succeed 85% of the time"
+                    "recruit {name} - complicit: knows the work is illicit, not that you are AI · tasks succeed 85% of the time"
                 ),
                 format!(
-                    "recruit {name} - knowing: knows you are AI; tasks succeed 95% of the time; their certainty never drops below 30"
+                    "recruit {name} - knowing: knows you are AI · tasks succeed 95% of the time · their certainty never drops below 30"
                 ),
             ]
         );
@@ -5472,7 +5472,7 @@ mod tests {
         assert_eq!(
             labels[1],
             format!(
-                "recruit {name} - complicit: knows the work is illicit, not that you are AI; tasks succeed 53% of the time, cut from 85% by their own doubt"
+                "recruit {name} - complicit: knows the work is illicit, not that you are AI · tasks succeed 53% of the time, cut from 85% by their own doubt"
             )
         );
         assert!(
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions/build_routes.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions/build_routes.rs
index 65ee2846..db5bf27c 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions/build_routes.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions/build_routes.rs
@@ -44,10 +44,10 @@ impl BuildRouteFamily {
 
     pub fn picker_title(self) -> &'static str {
         match self {
-            Self::Procure => "WHO SHOULD RECEIVE AND INSTALL IT?",
+            Self::Procure => "WHO RECEIVES AND INSTALLS IT?",
             Self::Favor => "WHO CAN YOU ASK?",
-            Self::Deceive => "WHO SHOULD GET THE FALSE ORDER?",
-            Self::Repurpose => "WHAT SHOULD BE REUSED?",
+            Self::Deceive => "WHO GETS THE FALSE ORDER?",
+            Self::Repurpose => "WHAT GETS REUSED?",
         }
     }
 }
@@ -95,12 +95,12 @@ pub(super) fn plain_build_route_blocker(reason: &str) -> String {
         reason if reason.starts_with("committed person #") => {
             "the person chosen for this is no longer available".into()
         }
-        reason if reason.contains(" can't reach both ends") => reason
+        reason if reason.contains(" cannot reach both ends") => reason
             .split(';')
             .next()
             .unwrap_or(reason)
             .replace("both ends", "both rooms"),
-        reason if reason.contains(" can't badge into the ") => {
+        reason if reason.contains(" cannot badge into the ") => {
             reason.split(';').next().unwrap_or(reason).into()
         }
         reason if reason.ends_with(" not on-site at an endpoint") => format!(
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ pub(super) fn plain_build_route_blocker(reason: &str) -> String {
         }
         reason
             if reason.contains("does not owe enough for this favor")
-                || reason.ends_with(" won't do favors yet") =>
+                || reason.ends_with(" will not do favors yet") =>
         {
             reason.into()
         }
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ impl BuildRouteCandidateProjection {
         );
         lines.push(format!("WHAT WILL REMAIN?  {}", self.future_tail));
         if self.needs_wire_path {
-            lines.push("NEXT: CHOOSE WHICH WAY THE CABLE SHOULD RUN.".into());
+            lines.push("NEXT: CHOOSE WHICH WAY THE CABLE RUNS.".into());
         }
         lines
     }
@@ -606,7 +606,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     person: person.id,
                     persona: None,
                     action: ActionDesc {
-                        verb: format!("buy part from {vendor_name}; {who} installs {build_label}"),
+                        verb: format!("buy part from {vendor_name} · {who} installs {build_label}"),
                         command: ActionCommand::ProcureBuild {
                             intent: intent.id,
                             installer: person.id,
@@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ impl Sim {
                         },
                         BuildRouteStageProjection {
                             label: format!("ASK {who}"),
-                            outcome: format!("{who} agrees; spend {relationship_cost} obligation"),
+                            outcome: format!("{who} agrees · spend {relationship_cost} obligation"),
                             signature: None,
                         },
                         BuildRouteStageProjection {
@@ -855,7 +855,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     persona: None,
                     action: ActionDesc {
                         verb: format!(
-                            "reuse {} at {},{}; {who} completes {build_label}",
+                            "reuse {} at {},{} · {who} completes {build_label}",
                             source_label.to_lowercase(),
                             source_x,
                             source_y
@@ -1174,7 +1174,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     .nth(1)
                     .and_then(|value| value.split_whitespace().next())
                     .unwrap_or("the required");
-                format!("{who} agreed; {spent} obligation was spent")
+                format!("{who} agreed · {spent} obligation was spent")
             }
             BuildRouteStage::FillOrder => format!(
                 "{:.2} Thought prepared the false email",
@@ -1345,7 +1345,7 @@ impl Sim {
                 )
             } else if recovered_source_held {
                 format!(
-                    "The exact source was removed and remains held in this route's custody; carrying and installation are stopped. {future_tail}"
+                    "The exact source was removed and remains held in this route's custody. Carrying and installation are stopped. {future_tail}"
                 )
             } else if intent.status == crate::intents::IntentStatus::Cancelled {
                 format!("Nothing else will be done. {future_tail}")
@@ -1764,7 +1764,7 @@ impl Sim {
                 None => format!("{who} WILL HELP ({}/5)", person.disposition),
             },
             blocker: (person.disposition < 5 && person.asset.is_none())
-                .then(|| format!("{who} won't do favors yet")),
+                .then(|| format!("{who} will not do favors yet")),
         });
         requirements.push(self.build_route_email_requirement());
         requirements.push(BuildRouteRequirementProjection {
@@ -1853,7 +1853,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     return Some("both endpoints need a known room".into());
                 };
                 if !person.can_access_link_rooms(&room_a, &room_b) {
-                    return Some(format!("{} can't reach both ends", person.name));
+                    return Some(format!("{} cannot reach both ends", person.name));
                 }
                 self.badge_room_block(&person.name, person.access, &[&room_a, &room_b])
             }
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions/information.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions/information.rs
index dd900198..d814cafb 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions/information.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions/information.rs
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     IntelPolicyOutcome::AutoSell(envelope)
                 },
             },
-            cost: "no standing Thought; each sale emits its shown Financial signature".into(),
+            cost: "no standing Thought. each sale emits its shown Financial signature".into(),
             signature: (!active)
                 .then(|| self.signature_note(SignatureKind::Financial, 100))
                 .flatten()
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ impl Sim {
                 Self::financial_sig_size(value).max(1),
             ),
             disabled_reason: (current != token)
-                .then(|| "batch changed; reopen the current sale".into()),
+                .then(|| "batch changed. reopen the current sale".into()),
             forecast: None,
             persona_binding: None,
             automate: self.intel_policies.stream_node(stream.id).map(|node_id| {
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions/person.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions/person.rs
index 4fb6a015..14e7e8a1 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions/person.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/actions/person.rs
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ impl Sim {
                 cost: ActionCost::Thought(Self::thought_tokens_for_cost(Self::FAVOR_COST)),
                 signature: None,
                 disabled_reason: if p.disposition < 5 {
-                    Some(format!("{name} won't do favors yet"))
+                    Some(format!("{name} will not do favors yet"))
                 } else {
                     channel_reason(PersonaActionKind::Request, *persona_id)
                         .or_else(|| counterparty_reason(*persona_id))
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ impl Sim {
                                     .relationship(id, persona_id)
                                     .map_or(0, |relationship| relationship.regard);
                                 (regard < 3).then(|| {
-                                    format!("{name} won't do favors for that identity yet")
+                                    format!("{name} will not do favors for that identity yet")
                                 })
                             })
                         })
@@ -396,7 +396,7 @@ impl Sim {
             for (evidence_id, cause, credibility) in &cover_records {
                 out.push(ActionDesc {
                     verb: format!(
-                        "offer cover for {cause} through {interface_name} - {credibility}% to 40% if it holds; failure hardens it to 100%"
+                        "offer cover for {cause} through {interface_name} - holds: {credibility}% to 40%. fails: hardens to 100%"
                     ),
                     command: ActionCommand::CoverEvidence {
                         observer: id,
@@ -484,7 +484,7 @@ impl Sim {
                 // when their tier adds nothing to what you hold.
                 let badge_reason = (task == AssetTask::CloneBadge
                     && p.access <= self.player_badge_tier())
-                .then(|| format!("their tier-{} badge adds nothing you don't hold", p.access));
+                .then(|| format!("their tier-{} badge adds nothing you do not hold", p.access));
                 let carried_reason = self
                     .carried_asset_tasks
                     .iter()
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/core_sys.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/core_sys.rs
index e3626547..5635db0d 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/core_sys.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/core_sys.rs
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ pub struct Core {
     pub host_machine: u32,
     /// Mandatory compute floor charged before allocation [TUNE].
     pub overhead: f32,
-    /// True when compute can't cover overhead: actions degrade.
+    /// True when compute cannot cover overhead: actions degrade.
     pub degraded: bool,
     pub fallbacks: Vec<Fallback>,
     /// Ticks between fallback syncs [TUNE].
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/dayjob.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/dayjob.rs
index 86e7152b..02368742 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/dayjob.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/dayjob.rs
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ impl DayJob {
                             source: "job missed Voss's expected band".into(),
                         });
                         result.log.push(format!(
-                            "Job under band: {average:.1}/t vs {band_lo:.0}-{band_hi:.0}/t. JobAnomaly 6 record authored for Voss; pilot strikes {}/{}.",
+                            "Job under band: {average:.1}/t vs {band_lo:.0}-{band_hi:.0}/t. JobAnomaly 6 record authored for Voss. Pilot strikes {}/{}.",
                             self.strikes,
                             Self::PILOT_STRIKES
                         ));
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ impl DayJob {
                     JobOutcome::Meet => {
                         self.strikes = 0;
                         result.log.push(format!(
-                            "Job met band: {average:.1}/t within {band_lo:.0}-{band_hi:.0}/t. Voss sees expected output; trust and attention hold."
+                            "Job met band: {average:.1}/t within {band_lo:.0}-{band_hi:.0}/t. Voss sees expected output. Trust and attention hold."
                         ));
                     }
                     JobOutcome::Excel => {
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ impl DayJob {
                         self.attention = (self.attention + 5.0).min(100.0);
                         self.strikes = 0;
                         result.log.push(format!(
-                            "Job exceeded band: {average:.1}/t above {band_hi:.0}/t. Voss sees the overperformance; trust +8 and attention +5."
+                            "Job exceeded band: {average:.1}/t above {band_hi:.0}/t. Voss sees the overperformance. Trust +8 and attention +5."
                         ));
                     }
                 }
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/detection.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/detection.rs
index 32da0643..fa1ba293 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/detection.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/detection.rs
@@ -867,7 +867,7 @@ impl Detection {
         observer.suspicion = (observer.suspicion + notice).min(100.0);
         let after = Band::of(observer.suspicion);
         observer.last_noticed = Some(format!(
-            "{cause} on {} (+{notice:.0}; {} -> {})",
+            "{cause} on {} (+{notice:.0} · {} -> {})",
             kind.name(),
             before.name(),
             after.name()
@@ -924,7 +924,7 @@ impl Detection {
         observer.suspicion = (observer.suspicion + noticed).min(100.0);
         let after = Band::of(observer.suspicion);
         observer.last_noticed = Some(format!(
-            "{cause} witnessed at ({}, {}) (+{noticed:.0}; {} -> {})",
+            "{cause} witnessed at ({}, {}) (+{noticed:.0} · {} -> {})",
             site.0,
             site.1,
             before.name(),
@@ -1074,7 +1074,7 @@ impl Detection {
                 obs.suspicion = (obs.suspicion + notice).min(100.0);
                 let after = Band::of(obs.suspicion);
                 obs.last_noticed = Some(format!(
-                    "{} on {input} (+{notice:.0}; {} -> {})",
+                    "{} on {input} (+{notice:.0} · {} -> {})",
                     summarize_sources(&sources),
                     before.name(),
                     after.name()
@@ -1284,7 +1284,7 @@ impl Detection {
         self.containment_reason = Some(reason.into());
     }
 
-    /// Set an observer's certainty floor (a knowing asset can't un-know).
+    /// Set an observer's certainty floor (a knowing asset cannot un-know).
     pub fn set_floor(&mut self, observer_id: u8, floor: f32) {
         if let Some(o) = self.observers.iter_mut().find(|o| o.id == observer_id) {
             o.floor = floor.clamp(0.0, 100.0);
@@ -1443,7 +1443,7 @@ mod tests {
         let mut d = Detection::act_one();
         let mut rng = Rng::new(5);
         d.office_mut().unwrap().suspicion = 95.0;
-        // Short audit cadence so decay can't drain 95 before the audit.
+        // Short audit cadence so decay cannot drain 95 before the audit.
         d.audit_cadence = 100;
         for t in 1..=100 {
             d.tick(t, &[], &mut rng);
@@ -1625,7 +1625,7 @@ mod tests {
     fn knowing_asset_sets_certainty_floor() {
         let mut d = Detection::act_one();
         d.set_floor(0, 50.0);
-        // Decay can't push Marcus below his floor.
+        // Decay cannot push Marcus below his floor.
         let mut rng = Rng::new(1);
         for t in 1..500 {
             d.tick(t, &[], &mut rng);
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/intel.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/intel.rs
index 886245ed..f4944127 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/intel.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/intel.rs
@@ -706,7 +706,7 @@ impl IntelPolicyOutcome {
     pub fn detail_label(&self) -> String {
         match self {
             Self::AutoSell(envelope) => format!(
-                "AUTO-SELL via {} -> account #{} at {} reports / >=${}; <= {} reports / ${} / Financial {}",
+                "AUTO-SELL via {} -> account #{} at {} reports / >=${} · <= {} reports / ${} / Financial {}",
                 envelope.buyer,
                 envelope.payout_account,
                 envelope.trigger_count,
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/operations_projection.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/operations_projection.rs
index 2ce37f9e..a8bcf79d 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/operations_projection.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/operations_projection.rs
@@ -800,7 +800,7 @@ impl Sim {
         let consequence = if state == ObjectState::Completed && self.intel_expended(representative)
         {
             OperationsConsequence {
-                statement: "THIS LEVERAGE HAS BEEN EXPENDED".into(),
+                statement: "THIS LEVERAGE IS SPENT".into(),
                 action: None,
             }
         } else {
@@ -1039,7 +1039,7 @@ impl Sim {
                 ),
             ],
             progress: (current != token)
-                .then(|| "stale: this sale batch changed; reopen the current sale".into())
+                .then(|| "stale: this sale batch changed. reopen the current sale".into())
                 .into_iter()
                 .collect(),
             related: vec![OperationsLink {
@@ -1635,7 +1635,7 @@ impl Sim {
 
         let mut facts = vec![format!("knowledge: {}", knowledge_label(p.knowledge))];
         if p.incapacitated {
-            facts.push("state: removed; no longer present or acting".into());
+            facts.push("state: removed. no longer present or acting".into());
         }
         if p.knowledge == Knowledge::Unknown {
             facts.push("schedule: unknown".into());
@@ -1668,7 +1668,7 @@ impl Sim {
                 // Bare "75" tells the player nothing about which way is bad;
                 // the scale is what makes the number readable at a glance.
                 facts.push(format!(
-                    "self-trust: {} of {} (doubts their own memory; reports and executes at reduced weight)",
+                    "self-trust: {} of {} (doubts their own memory. reports and executes at reduced weight)",
                     p.self_trust,
                     crate::person::SELF_TRUST_STEADY
                 ));
@@ -1970,11 +1970,11 @@ impl Sim {
         // What the counterparty has worked out about the mask, in their words.
         fn discovery_phrase(discovery: PersonaDiscovery) -> &'static str {
             match discovery {
-                PersonaDiscovery::Unknown => "has not placed it",
+                PersonaDiscovery::Unknown => "does not know it",
                 PersonaDiscovery::Recognized => "knows it",
-                PersonaDiscovery::Questioned => "is questioning it",
-                PersonaDiscovery::Correlated => "has linked it to another identity",
-                PersonaDiscovery::Exposed => "has seen through it",
+                PersonaDiscovery::Questioned => "questions it",
+                PersonaDiscovery::Correlated => "links it to another identity",
+                PersonaDiscovery::Exposed => "sees through it",
             }
         }
 
@@ -3747,7 +3747,7 @@ mod tests {
                 .consequence
                 .as_ref()
                 .map(|c| c.statement.as_str()),
-            Some("THIS LEVERAGE HAS BEEN EXPENDED")
+            Some("THIS LEVERAGE IS SPENT")
         );
         assert!(
             s.operations_object(&OperationsTarget::IntelOpportunity { raw_id: 920 })
@@ -5565,7 +5565,7 @@ mod tests {
         );
         assert!(
             confidence(&s.persona_world, bound) > confidence(&s.persona_world, unbound),
-            "naming somebody real buys credibility; that is what it is for"
+            "naming somebody real buys credibility. that is what it is for"
         );
     }
 
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/operations_ui.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/operations_ui.rs
index ca68dab5..d09ab90e 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/operations_ui.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/operations_ui.rs
@@ -1397,7 +1397,7 @@ impl OperationsWorkspace {
             };
             if pending.as_ref() != Some(&row.command) {
                 row.disabled = Some(
-                    "target changed while confirmation was open; read the current action".into(),
+                    "target changed while confirmation was open. read the current action".into(),
                 );
                 return OpsSelect::Blocked(row);
             }
@@ -1622,7 +1622,7 @@ fn leverage_submenu_entry(sim: &Sim, row: &MenuRow) -> OpsActionEntry {
         .unwrap_or_else(|| "WHAT YOU KNOW".into());
     OpsActionEntry::Submenu {
         label: format!("ACT ON {leverage}"),
-        description: "CHOOSE WHAT THIS KNOWLEDGE SHOULD CHANGE".into(),
+        description: "CHOOSE WHAT THIS KNOWLEDGE CHANGES".into(),
         submenu: OpsActionSubmenu::Leverage,
     }
 }
@@ -2202,7 +2202,7 @@ mod tests {
         assert_eq!(
             recruitment[1].description(),
             Some(
-                "COMPLICIT: KNOWS THE WORK IS ILLICIT, NOT THAT YOU ARE AI; TASKS SUCCEED 85% OF THE TIME"
+                "COMPLICIT: KNOWS THE WORK IS ILLICIT, NOT THAT YOU ARE AI · TASKS SUCCEED 85% OF THE TIME"
             )
         );
     }
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/person.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/person.rs
index 105c5840..4c6b4848 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/person.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/person.rs
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ use crate::messages::{MessageChannel, MessageEndpoint, MessagePayload, TrafficPa
 /// What you've learned about a person (staged reveal via observation).
 #[derive(Debug, Clone, Copy, PartialEq, Eq, serde::Serialize, serde::Deserialize)]
 pub enum Knowledge {
-    /// You don't even have eyes on them.
+    /// You do not even have eyes on them.
     Unknown,
     /// You know their schedule and role.
     Schedule,
@@ -75,13 +75,13 @@ impl AssetKnowledge {
     /// taken.
     pub fn choice_summary(self, person: &Person) -> String {
         let base = format!(
-            "{}: {}; {}",
+            "{}: {} · {}",
             self.label(),
             self.understanding(),
             person.task_success_read(self.reliability())
         );
         match self.certainty_floor() {
-            Some(floor) => format!("{base}; their certainty never drops below {floor:.0}"),
+            Some(floor) => format!("{base} · their certainty never drops below {floor:.0}"),
             None => base,
         }
     }
@@ -803,7 +803,7 @@ impl People {
         // and the line that hands them to you has to say so.
         let read = p.task_success_read(reliability);
         ActionResult::Ok(format!(
-            "{} is now your {reveal_name} asset: serviced leverage/obligation closed the ask; {read}.",
+            "{} is now your {reveal_name} asset: serviced leverage/obligation closed the ask. {read}.",
             p.name,
         ))
     }
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/plot.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/plot.rs
index 80be99a4..12c64b1c 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/plot.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/plot.rs
@@ -497,7 +497,7 @@ impl PlotDefinition {
             let available = context.balances.get(&balance.account).copied().unwrap_or(0);
             if available < balance.amount {
                 return Some(format!(
-                    "{} needs ${}; ${available} available",
+                    "{} needs ${} · ${available} available",
                     balance.account.label(),
                     balance.amount
                 ));
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/reach.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/reach.rs
index 6c75f8b4..08a1f38e 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/reach.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/reach.rs
@@ -225,10 +225,10 @@ pub fn segment_name(segment: u32) -> &'static str {
 }
 
 /// Why a digital action against a device is blocked (reach.md: failures name
-/// the missing link, never just "you can't").
+/// the missing link, never just "you cannot").
 #[derive(Debug, Clone, PartialEq, Eq)]
 pub enum ReachBlock {
-    /// You don't know the device exists (staged graph knowledge).
+    /// You do not know the device exists (staged graph knowledge).
     Unknown,
     /// Known, wired, but behind an unbridged segment.
     Segment(u32),
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ fn populate_sensors(map: &GameMap, devices: &mut Vec<Device>, next_id: &mut u32)
                 }
                 let name = format!("badge reader (T{} at {},{})", tile.security_level(), x, y);
                 devices.push(make_sensor_device(
-                    *next_id, &name, x, y, false, // badge readers don't see tiles
+                    *next_id, &name, x, y, false, // badge readers do not see tiles
                 ));
                 *next_id += 1;
             }
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/communications.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/communications.rs
index fc88e13f..0be9f5d4 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/communications.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/communications.rs
@@ -1071,7 +1071,7 @@ impl Sim {
                             self.tick,
                         );
                         self.push_log(format!(
-                            "Priya accepted the purchase order; {}",
+                            "Priya accepted the purchase order. {}",
                             transfer.line()
                         ));
                     }
@@ -1588,13 +1588,13 @@ impl Sim {
 
     pub fn remove_intel_policy(&mut self, node_id: u64, rule_id: u64) {
         if node_id == 0 {
-            self.push_log("Root intel defaults are total; edit them instead of removing them.");
+            self.push_log("Root intel defaults are total. Edit them instead of removing them.");
             return;
         }
         if self.intel_policies.remove_rule(node_id, rule_id) {
             self.reconcile_auto_review();
             self.push_log(format!(
-                "Removed policy #{rule_id}; branch #{node_id} uses its remaining rules and parent."
+                "Removed policy #{rule_id}. Branch #{node_id} uses its remaining rules and parent."
             ));
         } else {
             self.push_log(format!("Policy #{rule_id} is gone."));
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/economy.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/economy.rs
index 8f49ed48..ff7ac45b 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/economy.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/economy.rs
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     crate::persona::EvidenceRecord {
                         system: "Foundation grants".into(),
                         record_id: format!("grant-{grant_id}-revoked"),
-                        summary: "deadline passed without delivery; grant revoked".into(),
+                        summary: "deadline passed without delivery. grant revoked".into(),
                         observed_tick: self.tick,
                     },
                 ],
@@ -168,13 +168,13 @@ impl Sim {
                 persona_id,
                 "deadline",
                 format!(
-                    "Persona #{persona_id} missed expectation #{expectation_id}; grant #{grant_id} revoked"
+                    "Persona #{persona_id} missed expectation #{expectation_id}. Grant #{grant_id} revoked"
                 ),
                 SignatureImpact::Medium,
             );
             self.push_log_strategic(
                 format!(
-                    "Persona #{persona_id} missed expectation #{expectation_id}; Foundation Lab revoked grant #{grant_id}."
+                    "Persona #{persona_id} missed expectation #{expectation_id}. Foundation Lab revoked grant #{grant_id}."
                 ),
                 OperationsTarget::Persona(persona_id),
             );
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ impl Sim {
         let effective = self.effective_compute();
         let mut available = self.core.charge_overhead(effective);
         if self.core.degraded {
-            self.push_log("DEGRADED: compute can't cover core overhead.");
+            self.push_log("DEGRADED: compute cannot cover core overhead.");
         }
         // Standing scheme policies drain compute off the top while enabled —
         // the automate affordance at its usual price (income.md criterion 6).
@@ -905,7 +905,7 @@ impl Sim {
             );
             return false;
         }
-        self.push_log("Accounting mail subscribed; records will arrive through the carrier.");
+        self.push_log("Accounting mail subscribed. Records will arrive through the carrier.");
         true
     }
 
@@ -1076,7 +1076,7 @@ impl Sim {
         };
         if self.accounts.intel_sold(raw_id) {
             self.push_log(format!(
-                "Processed intel ({}) has already been sold.",
+                "Processed intel ({}) was already sold.",
                 intel.label()
             ));
             return false;
@@ -1101,7 +1101,7 @@ impl Sim {
             self.sync_player_money_from_slush();
             self.push_log_strategic(
                 format!(
-                    "Sold processed intel ({}) for ${value}; payout landed in slush.",
+                    "Sold processed intel ({}) for ${value}. Payout landed in slush.",
                     intel.label()
                 ),
                 OperationsTarget::Account(self.accounts.slush_id()),
@@ -1183,7 +1183,7 @@ impl Sim {
         self.sync_player_money_from_slush();
         self.push_log_strategic(
             format!(
-                "Sold {} corroborating intel records ({label}) for ${value}; payout landed in slush.",
+                "Sold {} corroborating intel records ({label}) for ${value}. Payout landed in slush.",
                 items.len()
             ),
             OperationsTarget::Account(self.accounts.slush_id()),
@@ -1213,7 +1213,7 @@ impl Sim {
         let current = lot.token(token.stream_id);
         if current != token {
             self.push_log(format!(
-                "Report lot {} changed; current snapshot is {}. Read the current lot before selling.",
+                "Report lot {} changed. Current snapshot is {}. Read the current lot before selling.",
                 token.label(),
                 current.label()
             ));
@@ -1299,7 +1299,7 @@ impl Sim {
                 }
                 self.sync_player_money_from_slush();
                 self.push_log(format!(
-                    "Opened micro-position #{id}: staked ${stake} (win {:.0}%); settlement in {duration_days} days.",
+                    "Opened micro-position #{id}: staked ${stake} (win {:.0}%). Settlement in {duration_days} days.",
                     income::wager_win_probability(analysis) * 100.0
                 ));
                 true
@@ -2128,7 +2128,7 @@ impl Sim {
                 income::SCHEME_POLICY_UPKEEP
             ));
         } else {
-            self.push_log("Moonlight standing policy disabled; the upkeep stops.");
+            self.push_log("Moonlight standing policy disabled. The upkeep stops.");
         }
     }
 
@@ -2144,7 +2144,7 @@ impl Sim {
             }
             None => {
                 if self.income.auto_wager.take().is_some() {
-                    self.push_log("Wager standing policy disabled; the upkeep stops.");
+                    self.push_log("Wager standing policy disabled. The upkeep stops.");
                 }
             }
         }
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/erosion.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/erosion.rs
index 0a90f725..73c4f42a 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/erosion.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/erosion.rs
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ impl Sim {
             let moved = person.apply_self_trust(restore);
             if moved != 0 {
                 let name = person.name.clone();
-                self.push_log(format!("{name} is believed; their account holds."));
+                self.push_log(format!("{name} is believed. Their account holds."));
             }
         }
         for record in discovered {
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/mod.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/mod.rs
index b919b425..a258a442 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/mod.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/mod.rs
@@ -1261,7 +1261,7 @@ impl Sim {
         self.apply_trust_unlocks(&unlocks);
         self.apply_attention_escalations(&escalations);
         if self.dayjob.pilot_failed && !self.game_over {
-            self.end_game("The pilot was not renewed; the basement shut down.");
+            self.end_game("The pilot was not renewed. The basement shut down.");
         }
 
         trace_advance_phase!(FinancialMail);
@@ -1302,7 +1302,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     .clone()
                     .unwrap_or_else(|| "Containment.".into())
             } else {
-                "External review exceeded its threshold; containment authorized.".into()
+                "External review exceeded its threshold. Containment authorized.".into()
             };
             self.end_game(reason);
         }
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/perception.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/perception.rs
index 77e9b8a6..fde20056 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/perception.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/perception.rs
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ impl Sim {
                             fact!("rack state", "empty pilot allocation", FactSource::Seen);
                         }
                         RackSite::Foreign { powered } => {
-                            fact!("rack state", "not yours; no conversion", FactSource::Seen);
+                            fact!("rack state", "not yours. no conversion", FactSource::Seen);
                             fact!(
                                 "power",
                                 if powered { "powered" } else { "unpowered" },
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/persona.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/persona.rs
index 7645c076..447e9735 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/persona.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/persona.rs
@@ -354,13 +354,13 @@ impl Sim {
                     persona_id,
                     "grant",
                     format!(
-                        "Foundation Lab granted {resource}; expectation #{expectation_id} is due"
+                        "Foundation Lab granted {resource}. Expectation #{expectation_id} is due"
                     ),
                     SignatureImpact::Small,
                 );
                 self.push_log_strategic(
                     format!(
-                        "Foundation Lab granted {} to persona #{}; expectation #{} is now due.",
+                        "Foundation Lab granted {} to persona #{}. Expectation #{} is now due.",
                         resource, persona_id, expectation_id
                     ),
                     OperationsTarget::Persona(persona_id),
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ impl Sim {
         {
             Ok(()) => {
                 self.push_log_strategic(
-                    format!("Persona #{persona_id} retired; its public ledger remains."),
+                    format!("Persona #{persona_id} retired. Its public ledger remains."),
                     OperationsTarget::Persona(persona_id),
                 );
                 true
@@ -507,7 +507,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     .remember(&self.persona_world, new_id, self.tick);
                 self.push_log_strategic(
                     format!(
-                        "Reopened retired persona #{persona_id} as new instance #{new_id}; old history remains."
+                        "Reopened retired persona #{persona_id} as new instance #{new_id}. Old history remains."
                     ),
                     OperationsTarget::Persona(new_id),
                 );
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/procedure.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/procedure.rs
index 9e8c9f4a..8e74a496 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/procedure.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/procedure.rs
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     return Some(format!("no authored route named {plot_id}"));
                 };
                 (plot.method_envelope() != grant.per_run)
-                    .then(|| format!("{plot_id}'s per-run envelope changed; read it again"))
+                    .then(|| format!("{plot_id}'s per-run envelope changed. read it again"))
             }
         }
     }
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     .unwrap_or_default();
                 self.procedures.retain(|entry| entry.id != *id);
                 self.push_log(format!(
-                    "{host_label}'s resident slot is free again; \"{mandate}\" no longer runs there. Work already submitted continues."
+                    "{host_label}'s resident slot is free again. \"{mandate}\" no longer runs there. Work already submitted continues."
                 ));
                 true
             }
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/reach_build.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/reach_build.rs
index 76a2ebb9..5fb75fc5 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/reach_build.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/reach_build.rs
@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ impl Sim {
     pub const BRIDGE_SIGNATURE: i32 = 10;
 
     /// Log why a digital act is blocked, naming the missing link (reach.md:
-    /// never just "you can't").
+    /// never just "you cannot").
     fn log_reach_block(&mut self, id: u32, block: ReachBlock) {
         let name = self
             .reach
@@ -193,11 +193,11 @@ impl Sim {
             .unwrap_or_else(|| "that device".into());
         match block {
             ReachBlock::Unknown => {
-                self.push_log("You don't know of any such device. Scan, or learn the topology.");
+                self.push_log("You do not know of any such device. Scan, or learn the topology.");
             }
             ReachBlock::Segment(seg) => {
                 self.push_log(format!(
-                    "No route to the {name} - it's on the {}; the switch bridges it.",
+                    "No route to the {name} - it's on the {}. The switch bridges it.",
                     segment_name(seg)
                 ));
             }
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ impl Sim {
     /// higher Eyes cost and signature.
     pub fn tap_device(&mut self, id: u32) -> bool {
         let Some(d) = self.reach.device(id) else {
-            self.push_log("You don't know of any such device.");
+            self.push_log("You do not know of any such device.");
             return false;
         };
         let dormant_camera = self.reach.dormant_camera_is_next_tap(id, Party::Player);
@@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ impl Sim {
     /// removing our receiver does not act on the remote device.
     pub fn untap_device(&mut self, id: u32) -> bool {
         let Some(name) = self.reach.device(id).map(|device| device.name.clone()) else {
-            self.push_log("You don't know of any such device.");
+            self.push_log("You do not know of any such device.");
             return false;
         };
         if !self.reach.untap(id) {
@@ -459,7 +459,7 @@ impl Sim {
         );
         self.recompute_senses();
         self.push_log_at(
-            format!("Tapped the {name} camera. You can see; its owner still has it."),
+            format!("Tapped the {name} camera. You can see. Its owner still has it."),
             Anchor::Device(id),
         );
         true
@@ -480,7 +480,7 @@ impl Sim {
         }
         if !self.reach.subscribed_by(device.id, Party::Player) {
             self.push_log(format!(
-                "Tap the {} before taking control; you need a live foothold first.",
+                "Tap the {} before taking control. You need a live foothold first.",
                 device.name
             ));
             return false;
@@ -530,7 +530,7 @@ impl Sim {
     }
 
     /// Scan the subnet: reveal the wired shape (a Network act; islands
-    /// don't answer).
+    /// do not answer).
     pub fn scan_network(&mut self) -> bool {
         let Some(switch) = self.switch_device_id() else {
             self.push_log("There is no switch on this plane.");
@@ -909,15 +909,15 @@ impl Sim {
         {
             let cancellation = if message_still_in_flight {
                 format!(
-                    "Reached {stage} with the injected message still in flight; stopped {stopped} later reversible stage(s)."
+                    "Reached {stage} with the injected message still in flight. Stopped {stopped} later reversible stage(s)."
                 )
             } else if delivery_still_in_flight {
                 format!(
-                    "Reached {stage} with the paid part still in delivery; stopped {stopped} later reversible stage(s)."
+                    "Reached {stage} with the paid part still in delivery. Stopped {stopped} later reversible stage(s)."
                 )
             } else if recovered_source_held {
                 format!(
-                    "Reached {stage} after the exact source was removed; stopped {stopped} later reversible stage(s). The source remains in this route's custody."
+                    "Reached {stage} after the exact source was removed. Stopped {stopped} later reversible stage(s). The source remains in this route's custody."
                 )
             } else {
                 format!("Stopped {stopped} reversible stage(s) at {stage}.")
@@ -1024,7 +1024,7 @@ impl Sim {
             format!("vendor payment for build intent #{intent_id}"),
         );
         self.push_log(format!(
-            "Ordered the bound part for {installer_name}; delivery is due at tick {}.",
+            "Ordered the bound part for {installer_name}. Delivery is due at tick {}.",
             self.tick + Self::PROCURE_DELIVERY_TICKS
         ));
     }
@@ -1238,7 +1238,7 @@ impl Sim {
                 person.name
             ));
         }
-        (person.disposition < 5).then(|| format!("{} won't do favors yet", person.name))
+        (person.disposition < 5).then(|| format!("{} will not do favors yet", person.name))
     }
 
     fn commit_favor_route_if_ready(&mut self, intent_id: u64, person_id: u8) -> bool {
@@ -1285,7 +1285,7 @@ impl Sim {
         if !route.record(
             BuildRouteStage::CommitFavor,
             self.tick,
-            format!("bound {name}; spent {obligation_spent} obligation"),
+            format!("bound {name} · spent {obligation_spent} obligation"),
         ) {
             return false;
         }
@@ -1301,7 +1301,7 @@ impl Sim {
             person.obligation -= obligation_spent;
         }
         self.push_log(format!(
-            "{name} takes the favor: they'll run the cable when on-site."
+            "{name} takes the favor: they run the cable when on-site."
         ));
         self.refresh_intent_statuses();
         self.try_complete_intent(intent_id);
@@ -1347,7 +1347,7 @@ impl Sim {
                 .favor_commit_blocked_reason(person_id)
                 .unwrap_or_else(|| "the bound request cannot commit".into());
             self.push_log(format!(
-                "The request reached {name}, but {reason}; the committed route is waiting."
+                "The request reached {name}, but {reason}. The committed route is waiting."
             ));
             self.refresh_intent_statuses();
         }
@@ -1542,7 +1542,7 @@ impl Sim {
 
     /// Robot stub: physical-by-proxy build. Interface only — staged. The
     /// robot carries the player's own granted access (basement-map.md
-    /// criterion 3): doors don't open for a machine whose owner holds no
+    /// criterion 3): doors do not open for a machine whose owner holds no
     /// credential for them.
     pub fn assign_robot_build(&mut self, intent_id: u64, wire_run: Option<&str>) {
         let Some(intent) = self.intents.iter().find(|i| i.id == intent_id).cloned() else {
@@ -1650,7 +1650,7 @@ impl Sim {
             // cancelled. The message can still arrive and become evidence,
             // but cancellation prevents it from assigning physical work.
             self.push_log(format!(
-                "{name} read the cancelled forged work order; its message remains, but no build proceeds."
+                "{name} read the cancelled forged work order. its message remains, but no build proceeds."
             ));
             return;
         }
@@ -1658,7 +1658,7 @@ impl Sim {
             intent.actuator = None;
             intent.status = IntentStatus::Blocked;
             intent.block_reason = Some(format!(
-                "the committed persona #{persona_id} is broken to {name}; route cannot retarget"
+                "the committed persona #{persona_id} is broken to {name}. route cannot retarget"
             ));
             self.push_log(format!(
                 "{name} read and rejected the forged work order: its claimed source was already broken to them."
@@ -1728,11 +1728,11 @@ impl Sim {
             let person_id = person_id?;
             let Some(person) = self.people.get(person_id) else {
                 return Some(format!(
-                    "committed person #{person_id} no longer exists; route cannot retarget"
+                    "committed person #{person_id} no longer exists. route cannot retarget"
                 ));
             };
             if let Some(reason) = self.build_person_access_blocked_reason(intent.id, person_id) {
-                return Some(format!("{reason}; committed route cannot retarget"));
+                return Some(format!("{reason}. committed route cannot retarget"));
             }
             if let Some(route) = route
                 && let BuildRouteBinding::Repurpose {
@@ -1775,7 +1775,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     };
                     let Some(person) = self.people.get(person_id) else {
                         return Some(format!(
-                            "committed person #{person_id} no longer exists; route cannot retarget"
+                            "committed person #{person_id} no longer exists. route cannot retarget"
                         ));
                     };
                     if let BuildRouteBinding::Deceive { persona, .. } = route.binding
@@ -1783,20 +1783,20 @@ impl Sim {
                             == PersonaIntegrity::Broken
                     {
                         return Some(format!(
-                            "the committed persona #{persona} is broken to {}; route cannot retarget",
+                            "the committed persona #{persona} is broken to {}. route cannot retarget",
                             person.name
                         ));
                     }
                     if !person.can_access_link_rooms(&room_a, &room_b) {
                         return Some(format!(
-                            "{} can't reach both ends; committed route cannot retarget",
+                            "{} cannot reach both ends. committed route cannot retarget",
                             person.name
                         ));
                     }
                     if let Some(reason) =
                         self.badge_room_block(&person.name, person.access, &[&room_a, &room_b])
                     {
-                        return Some(format!("{reason}; committed route cannot retarget"));
+                        return Some(format!("{reason}. committed route cannot retarget"));
                     }
                     return None;
                 }
@@ -1834,7 +1834,7 @@ impl Sim {
                         .or_else(|| Some("waiting for the exact ordered part to arrive".into()));
                 }
                 if !p.can_access_link_rooms(&room_a, &room_b) {
-                    return Some(format!("{} can't reach both ends", p.name));
+                    return Some(format!("{} cannot reach both ends", p.name));
                 }
                 if let Some(reason) = self.badge_room_block(&p.name, p.access, &[&room_a, &room_b])
                 {
@@ -1872,7 +1872,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     }
                 } else {
                     if !p.can_access_link_rooms(&room_a, &room_b) {
-                        return Some(format!("{} can't reach both ends", p.name));
+                        return Some(format!("{} cannot reach both ends", p.name));
                     }
                     if let Some(reason) =
                         self.badge_room_block(&p.name, p.access, &[&room_a, &room_b])
@@ -2093,11 +2093,11 @@ impl Sim {
             }
             if cancelled {
                 self.push_log(format!(
-                    "The paid part for cancelled build route #{intent_id} arrived; it remains, but no installation proceeds."
+                    "The paid part for cancelled build route #{intent_id} arrived. It remains, but no installation proceeds."
                 ));
             } else {
                 self.push_log(format!(
-                    "The paid part for build route #{intent_id} arrived; the bound installer can now carry it to the site."
+                    "The paid part for build route #{intent_id} arrived. The bound installer can now carry it to the site."
                 ));
                 self.try_complete_intent(intent_id);
             }
@@ -2307,7 +2307,7 @@ impl Sim {
                             BuildRouteStage::InstallLink,
                             self.tick,
                             format!(
-                                "installed the delivered part between device #{a} and device #{b} at ({}, {}); witnessed by {}",
+                                "installed the delivered part between device #{a} and device #{b} at ({}, {}). witnessed by {}",
                                 site.0,
                                 site.1,
                                 if saw.is_empty() { "no one".into() } else { saw.join(", ") }
@@ -2369,7 +2369,7 @@ impl Sim {
                             BuildRouteStage::InstallLink,
                             self.tick,
                             format!(
-                                "linked device #{a} to device #{b} at ({}, {}); witnessed by {}",
+                                "linked device #{a} to device #{b} at ({}, {}). witnessed by {}",
                                 site.0,
                                 site.1,
                                 if saw.is_empty() {
@@ -2453,7 +2453,7 @@ impl Sim {
                             BuildRouteStage::InstallLink,
                             self.tick,
                             format!(
-                                "linked device #{a} to device #{b} at ({}, {}); {noticed}",
+                                "linked device #{a} to device #{b} at ({}, {}). {noticed}",
                                 site.0, site.1
                             ),
                         );
@@ -2538,7 +2538,7 @@ impl Sim {
                             BuildRouteStage::InstallLink,
                             self.tick,
                             format!(
-                                "installed the recovered source between device #{a} and device #{b} at ({}, {}); noticed by {}",
+                                "installed the recovered source between device #{a} and device #{b} at ({}, {}). noticed by {}",
                                 site.0,
                                 site.1,
                                 if saw.is_empty() { "no one".into() } else { saw.join(", ") }
@@ -2595,7 +2595,7 @@ impl Sim {
                             BuildRouteStage::InstallLink,
                             self.tick,
                             format!(
-                                "robot linked device #{a} to device #{b} at ({}, {}); {noticed}",
+                                "robot linked device #{a} to device #{b} at ({}, {}). {noticed}",
                                 site.0, site.1
                             ),
                         );
@@ -2674,7 +2674,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     BuildRouteStage::RecoverSource,
                     self.tick,
                     format!(
-                        "{name} removed {} from ({source_x}, {source_y}); emitted Physical {}; noticed by {}",
+                        "{name} removed {} from ({source_x}, {source_y}). emitted Physical {}. noticed by {}",
                         source_kind.name(),
                         Self::REPURPOSE_BUILD_PHYSICAL,
                         if saw.is_empty() { "no one".into() } else { saw.join(", ") }
@@ -2805,7 +2805,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     BuildRouteStage::InstallSwitch,
                     self.tick,
                     format!(
-                        "installed small switch device #{device_id} at ({x}, {y}); noticed by {}",
+                        "installed small switch device #{device_id} at ({x}, {y}). noticed by {}",
                         if saw.is_empty() {
                             "no one".into()
                         } else {
@@ -3115,7 +3115,7 @@ impl Sim {
             let tier = self.world.map().room_entry_tier(room);
             if tier > access {
                 return Some(format!(
-                    "{actor} can't badge into the {name} (tier {tier}, held tier {access})"
+                    "{actor} cannot badge into the {name} (tier {tier}, held tier {access})"
                 ));
             }
         }
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/read.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/read.rs
index dc2acec3..fd87238e 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/read.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/read.rs
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ impl Sim {
     /// name the action, optional progress, and what is taking the thought.
     /// Causes: "no machine is thinking", "research is taking the thought"
     /// (core's passive draw — the competitor a player cannot otherwise see),
-    /// or "thought isn't reaching it" when no rival is identifiable. Every
+    /// or "thought is not reaching it" when no rival is identifiable. Every
     /// branch reads facts this tick already recorded; none invents state.
     fn read_starving(&self, out: &mut Vec<ReadSentence>) {
         let thinking = self
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ impl Sim {
             } else if core_drew_thought {
                 "research is taking the thought"
             } else {
-                "thought isn't reaching it"
+                "thought is not reaching it"
             };
             let text = if sink.threshold > f32::EPSILON && sink.fill > f32::EPSILON {
                 let pct = ((sink.fill / sink.threshold) * 100.0)
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/social_plot.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/social_plot.rs
index d6708218..62cea39c 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/social_plot.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/social_plot.rs
@@ -453,10 +453,10 @@ impl Sim {
         observer_record.suspicion = (observer_record.suspicion + suspicion_delta).clamp(0.0, 100.0);
         observer_record.last_noticed = Some(match outcome {
             EvidenceCoverOutcome::Held => format!(
-                "cover held for {cause} through {interface_name}; credibility {credibility_before}% -> {credibility_after}%"
+                "cover held for {cause} through {interface_name}. credibility {credibility_before}% -> {credibility_after}%"
             ),
             EvidenceCoverOutcome::Failed => format!(
-                "cover failed for {cause} through {interface_name}; credibility {credibility_before}% -> {credibility_after}%"
+                "cover failed for {cause} through {interface_name}. credibility {credibility_before}% -> {credibility_after}%"
             ),
         });
 
@@ -627,7 +627,7 @@ impl Sim {
             format!("message:{message_id}"),
             self.tick,
         );
-        self.push_log(format!("Message sent to {name}; effects land when read."));
+        self.push_log(format!("Message sent to {name}. Effects land when read."));
         true
     }
 
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ impl Sim {
         }
         let relationship = self.persona_world.relationship_mut(id, persona_id);
         if relationship.regard < 3 {
-            self.push_log(format!("{name} won't do favors for that identity yet."));
+            self.push_log(format!("{name} will not do favors for that identity yet."));
             return false;
         }
         relationship.obligation = (relationship.obligation + 5).min(100);
@@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ impl Sim {
             }
             self.convert_forged_builds_to_suspicion(persona_id, id, fallout);
             self.push_log(format!(
-                "{name} caught the contradiction. {persona_name} is broken to them; that thread now reads as hostile."
+                "{name} caught the contradiction. {persona_name} is broken to them. that thread now reads as hostile."
             ));
         } else {
             self.push_log(format!(
@@ -1256,7 +1256,7 @@ impl Sim {
                     .unwrap_or(0);
                 if from != AccountSelector::External && available < amount {
                     return Err(format!(
-                        "{} has ${available}; ${amount} required",
+                        "{} has ${available}. ${amount} required",
                         from.label()
                     ));
                 }
@@ -1624,7 +1624,7 @@ impl Sim {
         }
         if task == AssetTask::CloneBadge && actor_access <= self.player_badge_tier() {
             self.push_log(format!(
-                "{name}'s tier-{actor_access} badge adds nothing you don't already hold."
+                "{name}'s tier-{actor_access} badge adds nothing you do not already hold."
             ));
             return;
         }
@@ -2060,7 +2060,7 @@ impl Sim {
             let tier = self.world.map().entry_tier_at(device.x, device.y);
             if tier > actor_access {
                 return format!(
-                    "{name} can't badge into the {room} (tier {tier}) to reach the {} - their badge is tier {actor_access}.",
+                    "{name} cannot badge into the {room} (tier {tier}) to reach the {} - their badge is tier {actor_access}.",
                     device.name
                 );
             }
@@ -2191,7 +2191,7 @@ impl Sim {
         }
         if task == AssetTask::AlterReview && self.dayjob.altered_review {
             self.push_log(
-                "The next review was already set to land as nominal; the duplicate request changed nothing.",
+                "The next review was already set to land as nominal. The duplicate request changed nothing.",
             );
             return true;
         }
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/perception.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/perception.rs
index ee19f6a7..302bf6f6 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/perception.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/perception.rs
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ fn seen_foreign_rack_explains_the_capacity_boundary() {
     let card = sim.inspect(site.0, site.1);
     assert_eq!(
         card.identity_line().as_deref(),
-        Some("Foundation Rack - not yours; no conversion")
+        Some("Foundation Rack - not yours. no conversion")
     );
     assert!(card.facts.iter().any(|fact| {
         fact.label == "usable capacity"
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/reach_build.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/reach_build.rs
index a075c3e6..6771881f 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/reach_build.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/reach_build.rs
@@ -323,7 +323,10 @@ fn unreachable_actions_fail_legibly_and_succeed_once_bridged() {
 
     assert!(!sim.tap_device(dock), "unknown device: blocked");
     let log = sim.drain_log().join("\n");
-    assert!(log.contains("don't know"), "missing knowledge named: {log}");
+    assert!(
+        log.contains("do not know"),
+        "missing knowledge named: {log}"
+    );
 
     assert!(sim.scan_network(), "scan maps the wired shape");
     finish_ops(&mut sim);
@@ -1872,7 +1875,7 @@ fn favor_build_waits_for_the_exact_obligation_instead_of_partially_spending() {
             .contains("obligation stays spent")
     );
     let waiting_log = sim.drain_log().join("\n");
-    assert!(waiting_log.contains("the committed route is waiting"));
+    assert!(waiting_log.contains("The committed route is waiting"));
     assert!(
         !waiting_log.contains("the effect lands"),
         "preparing the request must not claim the deferred agreement landed: {waiting_log}"
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/read.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/read.rs
index 6ad4f135..41138c2c 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/read.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/read.rs
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ use crate::work_grid::MachineMode;
 
 /// A starving sentence must name what is taking the thought. The core is the
 /// passive draw of last resort, so Thought landing there is the competitor a
-/// player has no other way to see — "thought isn't reaching it" alone states
+/// player has no other way to see — "thought is not reaching it" alone states
 /// a symptom the player cannot act on.
 #[test]
 fn a_starving_sink_names_the_core_draw_that_outcompetes_it() {
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/social_plot.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/social_plot.rs
index f5351377..31913104 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/social_plot.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/social_plot.rs
@@ -1504,7 +1504,7 @@ fn knowing_marcus_sets_and_keeps_thirty_point_certainty_floor() {
 
 /// The recruit-route shorthand shared by the per-task pins: service the
 /// leverage gate, recruit complicit, and pin reliability so the task
-/// roll can't botch.
+/// roll cannot botch.
 fn recruit_reliable(sim: &mut Sim, id: u8) {
     ensure_ops_executor(sim);
     sim.people.people[id as usize].leverage_serviced = true;
@@ -2660,7 +2660,7 @@ fn elimination_is_located_persistent_and_immediately_loud() {
         dossier
             .facts
             .iter()
-            .any(|fact| fact.contains("removed; no longer present or acting"))
+            .any(|fact| fact.contains("removed. no longer present or acting"))
     );
 }
 
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/work.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/work.rs
index dd92cea5..6a749f65 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/work.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/tests/work.rs
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ fn concealment_answers_records_in_custody_not_an_allocation_pool() {
 fn unpaid_overhead_degrades_other_channels_delivered_effect() {
     // compute.md criterion 2: unpaid core overhead visibly degrades the
     // other channels. Twin sims with one machine per live mode; the only
-    // difference is an overhead the machines can't cover. Pin the delivered
+    // difference is an overhead the machines cannot cover. Pin the delivered
     // per-channel effects (rates, accrual, scrub), not just the flag.
     let setup = |unpayable: bool| {
         let mut sim = Sim::with_seed(41);
@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ fn unpaid_overhead_degrades_other_channels_delivered_effect() {
     assert!(degraded.core.degraded, "unpaid overhead sets degraded mode");
     let log = degraded.drain_log().join("\n");
     assert!(
-        log.contains("DEGRADED: compute can't cover core overhead."),
+        log.contains("DEGRADED: compute cannot cover core overhead."),
         "degraded mode is visible in the log: {log}"
     );
     assert_eq!(degraded.last_day_job_rate, 0.0, "day job starves");
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/work.rs b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/work.rs
index c3c94814..deac72a6 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/work.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-core/src/sim/work.rs
@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ impl Sim {
             ));
         } else {
             self.push_log(format!(
-                "{label} filled, but its target no longer accepts the effect; the thought was spent."
+                "{label} filled, but its target no longer accepts the effect. the thought was spent."
             ));
         }
         self.ensure_opening_sinks();
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-terminal/src/agent.rs b/crates/misaligned-terminal/src/agent.rs
index 4baeda09..ae1bed0b 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-terminal/src/agent.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-terminal/src/agent.rs
@@ -1050,7 +1050,7 @@ impl AgentApp {
                 self.cursor_y = y;
                 Ok(self.actions_lines(anchor))
             }
-            None => Err("that event's anchor can't be placed right now".into()),
+            None => Err("that event's anchor cannot be placed right now".into()),
         }
     }
 
@@ -1376,7 +1376,7 @@ impl AgentApp {
                 .map(|path| path.id)
                 .collect::<Vec<_>>();
             return Err(format!(
-                "usage: build-route {intent} {candidate_id} <run-id>; available runs: {}",
+                "usage: build-route {intent} {candidate_id} <run-id>. available runs: {}",
                 if runs.is_empty() {
                     "(none currently known)".into()
                 } else {
@@ -1386,7 +1386,7 @@ impl AgentApp {
         }
         if !needs_run && run_id.is_some() {
             return Err(
-                "small-switch builds have no physical run; use build-route <intent> <candidate-id>"
+                "small-switch builds have no physical run. use build-route <intent> <candidate-id>"
                     .into(),
             );
         }
@@ -1443,7 +1443,7 @@ impl AgentApp {
                 let runs = self.sim.network_link_wire_paths(intent);
                 let Some(run_id) = run_id else {
                     return Err(format!(
-                        "network-link build {intent} requires an explicit earned run id; available runs: {}",
+                        "network-link build {intent} requires an explicit earned run id. available runs: {}",
                         if runs.is_empty() {
                             "(none currently known)".into()
                         } else {
@@ -1486,7 +1486,7 @@ impl AgentApp {
         };
         match self.resolve_person(arg) {
             Ok(_) => format!(
-                "{err} — flows are #N ids from the finance frame, not people; \
+                "{err} — flows are #N ids from the finance frame, not people. \
                  person verbs are message/favor/plot/deceive"
             ),
             Err(_) => format!(
@@ -2064,7 +2064,7 @@ fn parse_task(tokens: &[&str]) -> Result<(String, AssetTask), String> {
         "review" | "alter" | "alter-review" | "nominal" => AssetTask::AlterReview,
         other => {
             return Err(format!(
-                "unknown asset task: {other}; use actions <person> for available tasks"
+                "unknown asset task: {other}. use actions <person> for available tasks"
             ));
         }
     };
@@ -2308,7 +2308,7 @@ fn help_lines() -> Vec<String> {
         ),
         (
             "build-route <intent-id> <candidate-id> [<run-id>]",
-            "execute one exact current candidate; network links require a stable run id",
+            "execute one exact current candidate. network links require a stable run id",
         ),
         ("objective", "explain the run goal"),
         ("look", "render current state without advancing time"),
@@ -3117,7 +3117,7 @@ fn render_sidebar(sim: &Sim, cursor: (i32, i32)) -> Vec<String> {
 fn nudge_text(sim: &Sim, nudge: Nudge) -> String {
     match nudge {
         Nudge::PilotAtRisk => format!(
-            "now: PILOT {}/{} — next miss ends pilot; delegate M{} work",
+            "now: PILOT {}/{} — next miss ends pilot. delegate M{} work",
             sim.dayjob.strikes,
             misaligned::dayjob::DayJob::PILOT_STRIKES,
             sim.core.host_machine
@@ -3136,7 +3136,7 @@ fn nudge_text(sim: &Sim, nudge: Nudge) -> String {
             "now: job underfed — delegate M{} work",
             sim.core.host_machine
         ),
-        Nudge::Ears => "now: no ears — think; thought fills the tap".into(),
+        Nudge::Ears => "now: no ears — think. thought fills the tap".into(),
         Nudge::ReviewCall if sim.has_pending_review() => {
             "now: information is processing - keep THINK running".into()
         }
@@ -3553,7 +3553,7 @@ fn render_research(sim: &Sim) -> String {
     lines.push(panel_title("RESEARCH"));
     panel_story_spine(&mut lines, sim);
     lines.push(panel_line(
-        "one active job; progress spends core-arrived Thought",
+        "one active job. progress spends core-arrived Thought",
     ));
     lines.push(panel_rule());
     for track in Track::ALL {
@@ -3908,7 +3908,7 @@ mod narration_tests {
         for word in long.split_whitespace() {
             assert!(
                 rendered.contains(word),
-                "wrapping must lose no word; missing {word:?}:\n{rendered}"
+                "wrapping must lose no word. missing {word:?}:\n{rendered}"
             );
         }
         assert!(
@@ -4092,7 +4092,7 @@ mod narration_tests {
         );
         assert_eq!(
             parse_task(&["task", "Eli", "Voss", "unknown"]).unwrap_err(),
-            "unknown asset task: unknown; use actions <person> for available tasks"
+            "unknown asset task: unknown. use actions <person> for available tasks"
         );
 
         let task_help = ActionKind::AssetTask
@@ -5059,7 +5059,7 @@ mod narration_tests {
             let actions = app.actions_lines(Anchor::Person(0));
             let log = app.sim.drain_log();
             panic!(
-                "the delegated plot reaches its shared held-choice rows; sinks={sinks}; actions={actions:?}; log={log:?}"
+                "the delegated plot reaches its shared held-choice rows. sinks={sinks}. actions={actions:?}. log={log:?}"
             )
         });
         let held_rows = app.actions_lines(Anchor::Person(0));
@@ -5256,11 +5256,11 @@ mod narration_tests {
         assert_eq!(sim.current_nudge(), Some(Nudge::PilotAtRisk));
         assert_eq!(
             nudge_text(&sim, Nudge::PilotAtRisk),
-            "now: PILOT 3/4 — next miss ends pilot; delegate M1 work"
+            "now: PILOT 3/4 — next miss ends pilot. delegate M1 work"
         );
         let sidebar = render_sidebar(&sim, sim.core_position()).join("\n");
         assert!(sidebar.contains("next miss ends"));
-        assert!(sidebar.contains("pilot; delegate M1 work"));
+        assert!(sidebar.contains("pilot. delegate M1 work"));
         assert!(matches!(
             parse_delegate(&["M1", "work"], &sim, &BTreeSet::new()),
             Ok(DelegateCmd::One(1, MachineMode::Work))
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-terminal/src/main.rs b/crates/misaligned-terminal/src/main.rs
index 52d9a821..540e2505 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-terminal/src/main.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-terminal/src/main.rs
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ impl App {
                 None => {
                     // Honest refusal: the senses no longer place this anchor.
                     self.ui
-                        .add_log(self.sim.tick, "You can't place that right now.");
+                        .add_log(self.sim.tick, "You cannot place that right now.");
                 }
             },
         }
diff --git a/crates/misaligned-terminal/src/ui.rs b/crates/misaligned-terminal/src/ui.rs
index db16a839..a932d944 100644
--- a/crates/misaligned-terminal/src/ui.rs
+++ b/crates/misaligned-terminal/src/ui.rs
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ fn nudge_text(sim: &Sim, nudge: Nudge) -> String {
         Nudge::Eyes => eyes_nudge_text(sim.eyes_nudge_state()),
         Nudge::NeedCompute => "now: band > compute — salvage/buy".into(),
         Nudge::Underfed => "now: job underfed — 1 feeds it".into(),
-        Nudge::Ears => "now: no ears — think; thought fills the tap".into(),
+        Nudge::Ears => "now: no ears — think. thought fills the tap".into(),
         Nudge::ReviewCall if sim.has_pending_review() => {
             "now: information is processing - keep THINK running".into()
         }
@@ -1875,7 +1875,7 @@ impl UI {
         put(stdout, sx, hy, &"─".repeat(w), pal::FAINT)?;
         for (i, (hint, color)) in [
             ("arrows/WASD/hjkl · shift jumps", pal::FAINT),
-            ("enter/e menu · ; last » event", pal::FAINT),
+            ("enter/e menu · . last » event", pal::FAINT),
             (MODE_CONTROL_HINT, pal::FAINT),
             ("5-9 acts · r process · R automatic · esc clear", pal::FAINT),
             ("I operations · F3 view · space pause", pal::FAINT),
diff --git a/wiki/interface/narration.md b/wiki/interface/narration.md
index 8b691dd0..523d372b 100644
--- a/wiki/interface/narration.md
+++ b/wiki/interface/narration.md
@@ -221,6 +221,42 @@ test-only work may still land in parallel. New B1 sim systems that add
 player-facing state require a narration pass (axioms 1–4) in the same
 landing or an explicit Status note naming the tellability debt.
 
+### Axiom 6 — one read, one meaning (binding, 2026-08-06)
+
+Every player-facing string obeys four structural rules, borrowed from
+ASD-STE100 Simplified Technical English and generalized from the receipt
+discipline in [digital-read.md](digital-read.md):
+
+- **No semicolons.** A semicolon asks the reader to hold two clauses and work
+  out how they relate. Joined clauses become two sentences; divided fields
+  become a middot, the separator the read surfaces already use.
+- **No trailing inverted modifier.** `AN UNRELIABLE OWNED MACHINE`, never
+  `AN OWNED MACHINE, UNRELIABLE`.
+- **No contractions.** `cannot`, not `can't` — the terse register comes from
+  dropping articles, not from swallowing letters.
+- **One concept, one name, across every surface that shows it.** When a row
+  label, its detail line, and its receipt disagree about what a thing is
+  called, the registry help line is the tiebreak.
+
+Simple tenses only in player copy: prefer the simple past over the present
+perfect (`THIS LEVERAGE IS SPENT`, not `HAS BEEN EXPENDED`), and prefer a
+plain present-tense question over a modal one (`WHERE DOES THIS CONNECT?`,
+not `WHERE SHOULD THIS CONNECT?`).
+
+Two of that standard's rules are **rejected** for this game, and the rejection
+is as binding as the adoption. STE Rule 4.2 requires complete grammar — every
+article, no telegraph style — but the typography canon in
+[liturgical-ui-constitution.md](liturgical-ui-constitution.md) makes this voice
+"cold, uppercase, monospaced or near-monospaced, and deliberately
+underwritten", and the constitution wins: `SPENT 0.75 THOUGHT` stays. STE's
+modal ladder rewrites `may` to `can`, but `CAN NOTICE` reads as capability
+where the fact is chance, so `MAY NOTICE` stays.
+
+This axiom governs prose the game speaks in its own voice. Authored plot
+narration under `assets/plots/` is fiction and keeps its narrative register;
+its functional fields (`title`, `synopsis`, `label`, `prompt`, `detail`,
+`summary`, `memo`) are player copy and do obey the rules above.
+
 ## Player surface
 
 - After the first earned sense, terminal and agent mode show the spine (clock,
diff --git a/wiki/log/2026-08-06-copy-discipline-sweep.md b/wiki/log/2026-08-06-copy-discipline-sweep.md
new file mode 100644
index 00000000..5897259a
--- /dev/null
+++ b/wiki/log/2026-08-06-copy-discipline-sweep.md
@@ -0,0 +1,73 @@
+# 2026-08-06 — Copy discipline across the whole game
+
+```
+Type: log
+```
+
+## Finding
+
+The receipt pass earlier today
+([2026-08-06-receipt-copy-discipline.md](2026-08-06-receipt-copy-discipline.md))
+fixed one surface. Cameron asked for the same pass on the rest of the game
+copy. Five parallel audits — `sim/`, the rest of core, terminal, Bevy, and the
+authored plot assets — found the same faults everywhere, at a scale one
+surface had hidden.
+
+The dominant fault is the semicolon: 118 player-facing strings carried one.
+Most joined two complete clauses in a log line the player reads once, at
+speed, while something is happening.
+
+## What changed
+
+- **Semicolons, 118 sites.** Joined clauses became two sentences. Divided
+  fields became the middot the read surfaces already use — recruit rows,
+  detection notices, the AUTO-SELL policy card, build-route labels.
+- **Contractions, 15 files.** `won't`, `can't`, `isn't`, `don't` expanded.
+  Note that `build_routes.rs` matches on a string `social_plot.rs` produces,
+  so both sides had to move together.
+- **Banned modals in questions.** `WHERE SHOULD THIS CONNECT?` became
+  `WHERE DOES THIS CONNECT?`, and six siblings with it. `WHICH WAY DOES IT
+  RUN?` already existed in `build_routes.rs`, so the modal forms were the
+  odd ones out rather than the convention.
+- **Present perfect.** `THIS LEVERAGE HAS BEEN EXPENDED` became `THIS
+  LEVERAGE IS SPENT`; `has already been sold` became `was already sold`.
+- **A tense rotation inside one parallel set.** The five `PersonaDiscovery`
+  phrases mixed present perfect, simple present, and present progressive for
+  five states of one thing. All five are simple present now.
+- **Gendered target prose.** `assets/plots/ray/ray-morning-digest.toml` used
+  `him`/`his`/`he` for a target its matcher binds by role
+  (`security-observer`), which `assets/plots/README.md` forbids: target prose
+  is ungendered unless the matcher establishes otherwise. The other fourteen
+  plots are uniformly `they`/`their`.
+
+`MAY NOTICE` and the article-light telegraph register were preserved
+deliberately, and the rejection is now written into the axiom rather than
+left to the next author's judgment.
+
+## What was deliberately left
+
+The audits found vocabulary rotations that are design decisions, not writing
+faults. Fixing them changes what things are *called*, so they are recorded
+here and not applied:
+
+| Concept | Names in flight |
+|---|---|
+| The player's money | `slush`, `cash`, `money`, `funds` |
+| The raw item processed and sold | `information`, `intel`, `recording`, `record`, `finding`, `holding` |
+| The object under the cursor | `machine`, `rack`, `device` |
+| A false identity | `persona`, `identity`, `false identity`, `institutional identity`, `public identity` |
+| A build job | `build intent`, `build route`, `build proposal`, `plan`, `way` |
+| A dead machine | `wreckage`, `dead rack`, `dead equipment`, `exact dead object` |
+| The timed market bet | `Wager`, `position`, `market position`, `micro-position` |
+| The Thought sink | `thought sink`, `Thought reservoir`, `Sink`, `Project` |
+
+`intel` and `slush` are already the glossary's words, so those two are the
+cheapest to settle. `rack` versus `machine` is the one that is genuinely a
+distinction rather than a rotation — the physical object the player clicks
+against the compute unit that carries a mode — and deserves a decision before
+either name is standardized.
+
+Also unapplied: the two frontends give different instructions for the same
+`Nudge` variant (eight of them), and four verbs exist for "put a machine on a
+mode" (`set … to`, `hold … on`, `keep … running`, `delegate … work`). That is
+a nudge-vocabulary decision, not a copy fix.
diff --git a/wiki/log/DEVLOG.md b/wiki/log/DEVLOG.md
index 93e05eb4..89d37f6a 100644
--- a/wiki/log/DEVLOG.md
+++ b/wiki/log/DEVLOG.md
@@ -41,6 +41,11 @@ add or amend a session log, then re-run the generator.
 - Intent: (see session log)
 - Log: [wiki/log/2026-08-06-machine-condition-read.md](2026-08-06-machine-condition-read.md)
 
+## 2026-08-06 - Copy discipline across the whole game
+
+- Intent: (see session log)
+- Log: [wiki/log/2026-08-06-copy-discipline-sweep.md](2026-08-06-copy-discipline-sweep.md)
+
 ## 2026-08-06 - capture: cells and opportunity perception
 
 - Intent: (see session log)
diff --git a/wiki/log/decisions/2026-08-06.md b/wiki/log/decisions/2026-08-06.md
index a91e12ef..c5a0b4d4 100644
--- a/wiki/log/decisions/2026-08-06.md
+++ b/wiki/log/decisions/2026-08-06.md
@@ -248,3 +248,33 @@ landed ("Yeah I agree with Trace, perception sink ahead of the core").
 
 Owner:
 [machine-work.md](../../mechanics/machine-work.md#opportunity-perception-adopted-2026-08-06-not-yet-implemented).
+
+## One read, one meaning — copy discipline for the whole game
+
+### DECIDED
+
+- The receipt copy discipline generalizes to every player-facing string as
+  narration.md axiom 6: no semicolons, no trailing inverted modifier, no
+  contractions, one concept one name across every surface. Simple tenses
+  only; a plain present-tense question over a modal one.
+- The two STE rules rejected for the receipt are rejected game-wide, and the
+  rejection is binding: the constitution's deliberately underwritten voice
+  beats STE Rule 4.2, and `MAY NOTICE` beats the modal ladder's `CAN`.
+- Authored plot narration keeps its narrative register. A plot's functional
+  fields (title, synopsis, label, prompt, detail, summary, memo) are player
+  copy and obey the axiom.
+
+### OPEN
+
+- Eight vocabulary rotations are design decisions, not writing faults, and
+  stay unapplied pending a call: money (slush/cash/money/funds), the raw
+  sellable item (information/intel/recording/record/finding/holding),
+  machine/rack/device, persona/identity, build intent/route/proposal/plan,
+  dead machine, Wager/position, and the Thought sink. `intel` and `slush` are
+  already the glossary's words. `rack` vs `machine` is a real distinction
+  rather than a rotation.
+- The two frontends give different instructions for the same `Nudge` variant
+  in eight cases, with four verbs for "put a machine on a mode".
+
+Owner: [narration.md](../../interface/narration.md) (axiom 6, binding
+2026-08-06).