From b37aec58c72ea8f0ed53cc3a8e1235149b654d86 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "prompt.ac/@jeffrey" <mail@aesthetic.computer>
Date: Tue, 18 Aug 2026 09:29:26 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] =?UTF-8?q?loner:=20"in"=20onto=20the=20bar=202=20downbeat?=
 =?UTF-8?q?=20=E2=80=94=20the=20middle=20of=20the=20two=20placements?=
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@jeffrey: "in starts too soon now". It had gone to bar 1 beat 4.5 on the
last pass and to bar 2 beat 1.5 before that; the untried middle is the
bar 2 downbeat itself, so in takes 8.0 with up filling 6.5–8. in is
1.23x her sung length there, close to her own delivery.
---
 pop/loner/bin/halo3.py     | 4 ++--
 pop/loner/c/loner-chart.h  | 4 ++--
 pop/loner/vox4/.chart.json | 6 +++---
 3 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pop/loner/bin/halo3.py b/pop/loner/bin/halo3.py
index cfdce043e..075e37668 100644
--- a/pop/loner/bin/halo3.py
+++ b/pop/loner/bin/halo3.py
@@ -225,8 +225,8 @@ CHART = {
                              # on 20 — so OF starts the instant think ends
                              # ("of should start sooner, right after
                              # 'think' ends") with no rest needed at all.
-                             "durs": { 0: 2.0, 1: 2.0, 2: 2.5, 3: 1.0,
-                                       4: 2.5, 5: 2.0, 6: 2.0,
+                             "durs": { 0: 2.0, 1: 2.0, 2: 2.5, 3: 1.5,
+                                       4: 2.0, 5: 2.0, 6: 2.0,
                                        # think 1 (1.17×, her own speed — at 2
                                        # it was a 2.3× held tone), so OF keeps
                                        # its 4 beats at 1.01×, her real octave,
diff --git a/pop/loner/c/loner-chart.h b/pop/loner/c/loner-chart.h
index cf74cf472..58b38137f 100644
--- a/pop/loner/c/loner-chart.h
+++ b/pop/loner/c/loner-chart.h
@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@ static const ChartNote w_whole_line_notes[] = {
     { 0.00, 2.00, 7 },
     { 2.00, 2.00, 5 },
     { 4.00, 2.50, 3 },
-    { 6.50, 1.00, 2 },
-    { 7.50, 2.50, 0 },
+    { 6.50, 1.50, 2 },
+    { 8.00, 2.00, 0 },
     { 10.00, 2.00, 5 },
     { 12.00, 2.00, 2 },
     { 14.00, 2.00, -2 },
diff --git a/pop/loner/vox4/.chart.json b/pop/loner/vox4/.chart.json
index 9a81b1904..bbb33e082 100644
--- a/pop/loner/vox4/.chart.json
+++ b/pop/loner/vox4/.chart.json
@@ -64,14 +64,14 @@
    },
    {
     "beat": 6.5,
-    "dur": 1.0,
+    "dur": 1.5,
     "st": 2,
     "t": "up",
     "lead": 0.0
    },
    {
-    "beat": 7.5,
-    "dur": 2.5,
+    "beat": 8.0,
+    "dur": 2.0,
     "st": 0,
     "t": "in",
     "lead": 0.0
-- 
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