diff --git a/pop/loner/bin/halo3.py b/pop/loner/bin/halo3.py
index 74d5808cbb..6e166b8b40 100644
--- a/pop/loner/bin/halo3.py
+++ b/pop/loner/bin/halo3.py
@@ -226,7 +226,13 @@ CHART = {
                              # ("of should start sooner, right after
                              # 'think' ends") with no rest needed at all.
                              "durs": { 0: 2.0, 1: 2.0, 2: 2.5, 3: 1.5,
-                                       4: 2.5, 5: 2.0, 6: 2.0,
+                                       # "my" a beat sooner: the warp is one
+                                       # sequential frame map, so units cannot
+                                       # truly overlap — "in" simply ends where
+                                       # "my" begins, which is what overlapping
+                                       # would sound like anyway. in lands at
+                                       # 0.92x, her own speed.
+                                       4: 1.5, 5: 2.0, 6: 2.0,
                                        # think 1 (1.17×, her own speed — at 2
                                        # it was a 2.3× held tone), so OF keeps
                                        # its 4 beats at 1.01×, her real octave,
@@ -245,7 +251,7 @@ CHART = {
                                        # full bar because at 2 beats it was
                                        # too fast and abrupt
                                        12: 4.0, 13: 4.0, 14: 2.0, 15: 2.0,
-                                       16: 4.0, 17: 1.5, 18: 1.5 },
+                                       16: 3.0, 17: 1.5, 18: 1.5 },
                              # words whose syllables carry a melody must not
                              # be flattened to one tone by THE HOLD
                              # patiently is pa·tient·ly, three notes
diff --git a/pop/loner/c/loner-chart.h b/pop/loner/c/loner-chart.h
index e2cb005668..2fc4255fac 100644
--- a/pop/loner/c/loner-chart.h
+++ b/pop/loner/c/loner-chart.h
@@ -17,25 +17,25 @@ static const ChartNote w_whole_line_notes[] = {
     { 2.00, 2.00, 5 },
     { 4.00, 2.50, 3 },
     { 6.50, 1.50, 2 },
-    { 8.50, 2.50, 0 },
-    { 11.00, 2.00, 5 },
-    { 13.00, 2.00, 2 },
-    { 15.00, 2.00, -2 },
-    { 17.00, 2.00, -5 },
-    { 19.00, 4.00, 12 },
-    { 23.00, 3.00, 10 },
-    { 26.00, 3.00, 5 },
-    { 29.00, 4.00, 2 },
-    { 33.00, 4.00, 3 },
-    { 37.00, 2.00, 0 },
-    { 39.00, 2.00, -2 },
-    { 41.00, 4.00, 7 },
-    { 45.00, 1.50, 5 },
-    { 46.50, 1.50, 3 },
-    { 48.00, 2.00, 5 },
-    { 50.00, 4.50, 7 },
-    { 54.50, 4.00, 3 },
-    { 58.50, 3.00, 3 },
+    { 8.50, 1.50, 0 },
+    { 10.00, 2.00, 5 },
+    { 12.00, 2.00, 2 },
+    { 14.00, 2.00, -2 },
+    { 16.00, 2.00, -5 },
+    { 18.00, 4.00, 12 },
+    { 22.00, 3.00, 10 },
+    { 25.00, 3.00, 5 },
+    { 28.00, 4.00, 2 },
+    { 32.00, 4.00, 3 },
+    { 36.00, 2.00, 0 },
+    { 38.00, 2.00, -2 },
+    { 40.00, 3.00, 7 },
+    { 43.00, 1.50, 5 },
+    { 44.50, 1.50, 3 },
+    { 46.00, 2.00, 5 },
+    { 48.00, 4.50, 7 },
+    { 52.50, 4.00, 3 },
+    { 56.50, 3.00, 3 },
 };
 static const ChartNote w_sitting_curled_notes[] = {
     { 0.00, 3.00, 6 },
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ static const ChartNote w_n_for_time_to_pass_notes[] = {
 };
 
 static const ChartPhrase CHART[] = {
-    { "w-whole-line", 0.490, 61.50, 23, w_whole_line_notes },
+    { "w-whole-line", 0.490, 59.50, 23, w_whole_line_notes },
     { "w-sitting-curled", 0.020, 11.00, 5, w_sitting_curled_notes },
     { "w-i-think", 0.020, 3.50, 2, w_i_think_notes },
     { "w-of-a-stone", 0.000, 8.00, 3, w_of_a_stone_notes },
diff --git a/pop/loner/vox4/.chart.json b/pop/loner/vox4/.chart.json
index 4141b88606..479bc65262 100644
--- a/pop/loner/vox4/.chart.json
+++ b/pop/loner/vox4/.chart.json
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 {
  "w-whole-line": {
   "leadIn": 0.49,
-  "beats": 61.5,
+  "beats": 59.5,
   "voiced": [
    [
     0.0,
@@ -9,39 +9,39 @@
    ],
    [
     8.4993,
-    12.9015
+    11.895
    ],
    [
-    13.0032,
-    18.7575
+    11.9967,
+    17.7612
    ],
    [
-    19.0015,
-    25.6505
+    17.995,
+    24.6542
    ],
    [
-    25.9962,
-    32.696
+    24.9998,
+    31.6997
    ],
    [
-    33.001,
-    44.896
+    32.0047,
+    42.9033
    ],
    [
-    44.9977,
-    47.9358
+    43.005,
+    45.9432
    ],
    [
-    47.9968,
-    49.898
+    46.0042,
+    47.8952
    ],
    [
-    49.9997,
-    58.0618
+    47.9968,
+    56.059
    ],
    [
-    58.255,
-    62.3115
+    56.2522,
+    60.3087
    ]
   ],
   "notes": [
@@ -75,132 +75,132 @@
    },
    {
     "beat": 8.5,
-    "dur": 2.5,
+    "dur": 1.5,
     "st": 0,
     "t": "in",
     "lead": 0.0
    },
    {
-    "beat": 11.0,
+    "beat": 10.0,
     "dur": 2.0,
     "st": 5,
     "t": "myself\u00b7a",
     "lead": 0.0
    },
    {
-    "beat": 13.0,
+    "beat": 12.0,
     "dur": 2.0,
     "st": 2,
     "t": "myself\u00b7b",
     "lead": 0.1017
    },
    {
-    "beat": 15.0,
+    "beat": 14.0,
     "dur": 2.0,
     "st": -2,
     "t": "i",
     "lead": 0.0
    },
    {
-    "beat": 17.0,
+    "beat": 16.0,
     "dur": 2.0,
     "st": -5,
     "t": "think",
     "lead": 0.0
    },
    {
-    "beat": 19.0,
+    "beat": 18.0,
     "dur": 4.0,
     "st": 12,
     "t": "of",
     "lead": 0.2033
    },
    {
-    "beat": 23.0,
+    "beat": 22.0,
     "dur": 3.0,
     "st": 10,
     "t": "a",
     "lead": 0.0
    },
    {
-    "beat": 26.0,
+    "beat": 25.0,
     "dur": 3.0,
     "st": 5,
     "t": "stone",
     "lead": 0.0508
    },
    {
-    "beat": 29.0,
+    "beat": 28.0,
     "dur": 4.0,
     "st": 2,
     "t": "just",
     "lead": 0.0
    },
    {
-    "beat": 33.0,
+    "beat": 32.0,
     "dur": 4.0,
     "st": 3,
     "t": "waiting",
     "lead": 0.244
    },
    {
-    "beat": 37.0,
+    "beat": 36.0,
     "dur": 2.0,
     "st": 0,
     "t": "ve",
     "lead": 0.0
    },
    {
-    "beat": 39.0,
+    "beat": 38.0,
     "dur": 2.0,
     "st": -2,
     "t": "ry",
     "lead": 0.0
    },
    {
-    "beat": 41.0,
-    "dur": 4.0,
+    "beat": 40.0,
+    "dur": 3.0,
     "st": 7,
     "t": "pa",
     "lead": 0.0
    },
    {
-    "beat": 45.0,
+    "beat": 43.0,
     "dur": 1.5,
     "st": 5,
     "t": "tient",
     "lead": 0.0915
    },
    {
-    "beat": 46.5,
+    "beat": 44.5,
     "dur": 1.5,
     "st": 3,
     "t": "ly",
     "lead": 0.0
    },
    {
-    "beat": 48.0,
+    "beat": 46.0,
     "dur": 2.0,
     "st": 5,
     "t": "for",
     "lead": 0.0508
    },
    {
-    "beat": 50.0,
+    "beat": 48.0,
     "dur": 4.5,
     "st": 7,
     "t": "time",
     "lead": 0.0712
    },
    {
-    "beat": 54.5,
+    "beat": 52.5,
     "dur": 4.0,
     "st": 3,
     "t": "to",
     "lead": 0.0
    },
    {
-    "beat": 58.5,
+    "beat": 56.5,
     "dur": 3.0,
     "st": 3,
     "t": "pass",
diff --git a/pop/loner/vox4/.manifest.json b/pop/loner/vox4/.manifest.json
index db138a5e9f..7f80af88df 100644
--- a/pop/loner/vox4/.manifest.json
+++ b/pop/loner/vox4/.manifest.json
@@ -2,13 +2,13 @@
  "w-whole-line": {
   "slice": "f-whole-line",
   "lead_in": 0.49,
-  "beats": 61.5,
+  "beats": 59.5,
   "renders": {
-   "lead": 31.135,
-   "8ve-a": 31.135,
-   "8ve-b": 31.135,
-   "low3": 31.135,
-   "low5": 31.135
+   "lead": 30.15,
+   "8ve-a": 30.15,
+   "8ve-b": 30.15,
+   "low3": 30.15,
+   "low5": 30.15
   },
   "snaps": [
    "curled +65ms",